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是時候發表咱的詞作了....
文筆粗糙請見諒030;
內容包含多種詞牌,憶江南、一剪梅、踏莎行、如夢令等著名詞牌。
小的最喜歡填憶江南了//句式整齊,首句精練、收尾得宜,還有....是很短的小令owo``
咱擅長寫景與描寫植株,少為抒情。
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我在大大的詞裡不太看得出有寄託之意,而且描寫的部分太多,感情的部分太少,偶爾有顯得也太過直白。詞一般是婉轉的,就算是蘇軾一流的豪放派詞人,指的是創作主題的風格豪放,多以家事國事為主,而不是單統直抒胸臆,流於表面。
所以我覺得大大可以嘗試在詞裡面加入這些技巧。因為我自己是中國文學系,平時也有詩詞曲方面的創作,所以忍不住留下一點意見,希望沒有顯得唐突。
如果確定要寫,我會嘗試的。-。!