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葉念琛的「愛情四部曲」,內容不詳述,總之說到尾就是出軌,不論故事如何發展,最終還是出軌,不似會出軌的,就是出軌的那位8964 copyright protection446PENANAFmwiSi8b6p 維尼
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雖然不明白為何「出軌四部曲」會變成「愛情四部曲」但我認為同一手法可應用多部作品,也是不錯的練習,所以我決定模仿葉念琛的手法,改一個自己的版本8964 copyright protection446PENANAEvlCrORaHQ 維尼
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娟強大婚,準備簽紙,但娟的證婚人——好姊妹寶,遲遲未到,簽紙未能完成,強不耐煩,已與證婚人強父先簽8964 copyright protection446PENANA8jiPnhZ3AE 維尼
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情況危急,婚禮暫停,眾人趕往醫院8964 copyright protection446PENANA3LBO8RxLvT 維尼
白車上,娟陪伴寶,十分擔心,而寶竟說要詛咒娟8964 copyright protection446PENANASilPEn5HYm 維尼
「我要詛咒你⋯」8964 copyright protection446PENANAeOeFKCinL4 維尼
話未完寶便暈倒,此嚇壞了娟8964 copyright protection446PENANADu3zaBYptY 維尼
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為何如此?得從頭說起8964 copyright protection446PENANA0Xd8eaKWuF 維尼
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寶是一名護士,某日失神,工作出錯,以致孕婦病人命危8964 copyright protection446PENANAqq5zvmsba1 維尼
醫生搶救時,稱孕婦和BB只能救一人,問爸爸救誰,爸爸決定救B8964 copyright protection446PENANAWZiRWfFNfp 維尼
B最終救下,但卻因早產,身體衰弱8964 copyright protection446PENANAzteOIjep7P 維尼
孕婦雖然保命,但受到重創,昏迷不醒8964 copyright protection446PENANA0d9rVPQXbU 維尼
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寶查問後得知,傑稱正躲大陸婦人8964 copyright protection446PENANADPvrJJs5Lv 維尼
傑解說,早前赴大陸工作,遇上此陸婦,兩人投契生戀8964 copyright protection446PENANA69knNtaLAa 維尼
及後方知陸婦與傑朋友亦有一手,打算撇甩陸婦,但陸婦竟稱懷孕,要求與傑結婚,並來港找傑8964 copyright protection446PENANA5hkIfKmIv4 維尼
傑避至醫院,陸婦竟亦找到,相信是朋友出賣8964 copyright protection446PENANAIeEsKeFGsr 維尼
最終傑在寶相助下,成功脫身8964 copyright protection446PENANAnzUParfRik 維尼
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兩人回家時,寶問傑何以到醫院,傑坦承自己身患絕症,時日無多,現又遇上陸婦,嘆最後日子也無法安寧8964 copyright protection446PENANASarTruYY4C 維尼
傑得知寶被停職,邀寶做看護,助其避開陸婦,直至陸婦雙程證到期,寶答應傑8964 copyright protection446PENANAmcQAvGF4Kq 維尼
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同夜,寶回到家,發現娟多次來電8964 copyright protection446PENANAtNMxEQT7on 維尼
寶回覆,表示一切安好,有說有笑8964 copyright protection446PENANAAW71LBp7n9 維尼
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其實寶表面歡樂,內裡抑鬱,家裡因此亂七八糟8964 copyright protection446PENANAQSqThRa6YH 維尼
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回到現在8964 copyright protection446PENANABWjtVovSz0 維尼
寶夫趕到醫院,娟斥寶夫為何沒與寶一起8964 copyright protection446PENANAfOtDbTwxmq 維尼
寶夫稱早已被寶趕走,寶亦已拒絕聯絡多時8964 copyright protection446PENANAnFlfJUvJ7Y 維尼
娟斥寶夫居然趁寶懷孕分居8964 copyright protection446PENANAQEifM0JnCV 維尼
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醫生稱,生父是誰暫時不重要,因寶已死去,死因是自殺寶夫推測寶趁分居搞外遇,因懷孕被拋棄,所以自殺8964 copyright protection446PENANAKuEdOjiqzN 維尼
娟傷心,認為寶因知寶夫出軌,所以趕走寶夫8964 copyright protection446PENANAtKwhKQ89qf 維尼
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強思考如何善後時,年輕貌美的後母致電,問婚禮會否繼續8964 copyright protection446PENANAh5lbevN30Z 維尼
寶拒絕,婚禮就此完結8964 copyright protection446PENANAArvjEkS77N 維尼
後母續稱强父獨自送客時,不知何故,突然病情惡化,勸強盡快回家8964 copyright protection446PENANAUySTkW08h1 維尼
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後母稱領養需結婚三年,勸先考慮8964 copyright protection446PENANAkgDb2gKFMO 維尼
娟亦稱B現需住氧氣箱,暫未能領養,而娟亦想找出生父8964 copyright protection446PENANANl0FmalEi0 維尼
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離開時,後母交禮金予娟8964 copyright protection446PENANAgfbudZMusY 維尼
娟拒絕收下,因未結婚,並稱當初若非强父病重,强懇求,也不考慮簽紙,或現已分手8964 copyright protection446PENANAluyjKaxe7g 維尼
後母稱別當成禮金,當成資助娟舖頭裝修,娟雖缺錢,但依然拒收8964 copyright protection446PENANAsoMGPL25NE 維尼
糾纏之際,律師離開強家,稱剛為強父辦理遺囑8964 copyright protection446PENANAgwe1tx8QbN 維尼
娟趁機邀律師到寶家調查,一同離開強家8964 copyright protection446PENANA7hcKXAPpX3 維尼
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又回到前事8964 copyright protection446PENANAx7cbKg1NCW 維尼
寶、傑相處不錯,寶連洗澡,如廁等生活細節也妥善照顧,或因寶是護士,又或因兩人曾是情侶8964 copyright protection446PENANAxTXXtp6hK4 維尼
兩人閒聊時,憶起舊日戀事,發現當日分手原來因為誤會,現終有機會和解8964 copyright protection446PENANAXkrnZduCAg 維尼
兩人感情日增8964 copyright protection446PENANAlYbumZOztF 維尼
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隨後一次覆診中,寶感不適,檢查後發現懷孕8964 copyright protection446PENANA3CwGsEtyCb 維尼
傑喜,寶反而擔憂,抑鬱重臨8964 copyright protection446PENANA3FNFV1QW8p 維尼
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寶失常,怒而趕走陸婦,及後精神崩潰8964 copyright protection446PENANAs1LmcunApA 維尼
傑知道寶心底內藏秘密,但並未深究,只默默陪伴寶8964 copyright protection446PENANAclHUg10ryO 維尼
傑送寶回到家,發現寶家混亂8964 copyright protection446PENANAjDNYZcHNkG 維尼
寶解釋因護士工作每天面對生死,導致抑鬱,引致家亂,再加上近來發生了一些事8964 copyright protection446PENANAwkUM3aFIlu 維尼
寶準備坦白前事8964 copyright protection446PENANAEJf4ECFYoK 維尼
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律師從寶夫取得鎖匙後,與娟來到寶家8964 copyright protection446PENANAFZ89cBzkKz 維尼
娟不解,寶家何以混亂,思考原因時,律師在雜物堆中,翻出火警剪報,娟認出火警現場乃自己舖頭8964 copyright protection446PENANATdlDyRujWy 維尼
娟嘆舖頭未開張就火警,現周轉不靈,又不想收強家的巨額禮金,現束手無策8964 copyright protection446PENANAkdKe3MguM0 維尼
律師稱願借錢幫娟,重申並非因為舊日戀情,因娟已是人妻8964 copyright protection446PENANAEkDtJMaavb 維尼
娟感激,並指未簽紙不算8964 copyright protection446PENANAUmvIq6tWYP 維尼
兩人思考火警與寶的關係時,寶夫來到,並帶來寶的電話,指內有驚人情報8964 copyright protection446PENANAImdVJBcRYi 維尼
同時,強致電,望與寶夫見面8964 copyright protection446PENANAvlGIqEzsYd 維尼
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四人相見8964 copyright protection446PENANAQlHIejeLFr 維尼
強指收到速遞,內有娟與寶夫出軌的片,要求解釋8964 copyright protection446PENANAfRZCkAksju 維尼
同樣片段,也在寶的電話內發現,認為寶寄予強8964 copyright protection446PENANAwmYfRXIw7w 維尼
娟解釋,當日是自己發現寶夫軌,所以跟蹤,剛好同時出入時鐘酒店而已,並沒有出軌8964 copyright protection446PENANAwCNOOEEQgC 維尼
娟認為寶臨終前詛咒自己,全因此片,慨嘆天大誤會,並斥責寶夫出軌8964 copyright protection446PENANAu3ly48jskg 維尼
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寶夫未有反駁,續指真正驚人的是,內有强與寶的出軌片8964 copyright protection446PENANAXBja9v8Gno 維尼
娟震驚,即問因由,強稱因娟與寶夫出軌,所以與寶出軌報復8964 copyright protection446PENANAfmc02K7haL 維尼
强還承認,如無意外,是B生父8964 copyright protection446PENANAlb8TFlJoya 維尼
寶夫怒,但不敢動手,似有把柄在強手8964 copyright protection446PENANAn6MJiKqYrj 維尼
娟決定簽紙與強結婚,再立即離婚,與強爭撫養權8964 copyright protection446PENANAGWPwCi4HwU 維尼
律師亦答應幫娟打官司到底,强樂意應戰8964 copyright protection446PENANAhA6B1FYPwE 維尼
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此事,寶的版本與眾人相似8964 copyright protection446PENANANpVonc8hh8 維尼
寶回想寶夫因為家中混亂,寶又情緒失常,所以生氣不回家8964 copyright protection446PENANAbX9vxEiS2t 維尼
寶以為寶夫軌,故跟蹤,發現寶夫真的出軌了8964 copyright protection446PENANAsSBf6iKFsA 維尼
及後強提出與寶出軌報復,寶應承8964 copyright protection446PENANAGemi9s0xNE 維尼
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傑似沒將往事聽進去,只忙著整理寶家,稱不理前事,接受寶的過去,並願意照顧寶,縱使剩下時間不多8964 copyright protection446PENANAs8Yxr8CS9Z 維尼
寶大喜,一同整理家,寶家終於回復正常,兩人雖已萌愛意,但並未有進一步行動,連過夜也沒有8964 copyright protection446PENANABYzic3rNqs 維尼
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某日,傑要覆診,寶亦要胎檢,傑稱可自行到醫院,不用寶接送,約定在醫院見面8964 copyright protection446PENANA5kBMyIbJvl 維尼
但寶到醫院後,不見傑,電話又聯絡不上,上門拜訪時,發現傑家火警,傑就此死去8964 copyright protection446PENANAdiWWt58HeU 維尼
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調查得知,火警時,現場傑不止自己一人,還有陸婦在,而且門被反鎖8964 copyright protection446PENANAImNyaZEbso 維尼
原來陸婦冒逾期居留之險,埋伏傑家,迫傑簽紙結婚,傑不就範,陸婦則禁錮,然而樓下舖頭卻火警,燒死傑與陸婦,而該舖頭正是娟的8964 copyright protection446PENANAuDIAvv30k1 維尼
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寶悲傷不已時,收到娟、強的婚訊,並邀請當證婚人8964 copyright protection446PENANAB50QS3bsGi 維尼
兩人結婚理由,上面已有說明8964 copyright protection446PENANAV2dUtthUUF 維尼
寶再度抑鬱,屋再混亂,心中生一歪念,決定在婚禮當日在場自殺8964 copyright protection446PENANAXoAY2Wd9Np 維尼
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撫養權一事,本來娟、強將對薄公堂,但強決定放棄撫養權並離婚8964 copyright protection446PENANAAlKysewKg5 維尼
聽聞因强父亡,強不願將事情鬧大,所以放棄一切8964 copyright protection446PENANAWRJ1JQv8FX 維尼
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事件看似告一段落,但到底寶夫與誰出軌呢?8964 copyright protection446PENANA4hd3QEMMo4 維尼
答案是⋯後母8964 copyright protection446PENANAviIjYzvNbg 維尼
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其實當日拍下娟和寶夫出入時鐘酒店,並非寶,而是強8964 copyright protection446PENANAZN1OoV0FOs 維尼
目的是引起寶注意,要寶到寶夫出軌地方,認清真正的出軌對象,後母8964 copyright protection446PENANA6OeyWpgJNd 維尼
後母因強父病重,與健身教練寶夫偷情,解決需要8964 copyright protection446PENANAYt9Pb96AtS 維尼
雖然某次幽會,被娟跟蹤,但卻未發現後母,而此過程則被強拍下8964 copyright protection446PENANAOYeAzX90aP 維尼
強以寶夫勾引後母和娟為由,迫寶與自己交配,並必須懷孕,不然則痛毆寶夫和娟,並將過程拍片,要脅寶不准墮胎8964 copyright protection446PENANAH3HNltoaNP 維尼
寶就範後,寶趕走寶夫,因不想寶夫見到自己大肚,也不想原諒寶夫8964 copyright protection446PENANARdIAyE6nC6 維尼
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強為何要搭上寶呢?因為報復,報後後母出軌8964 copyright protection446PENANAJ9tWoGStwj 維尼
原因當然不是孝順,而是不倫之戀8964 copyright protection446PENANA7R9XLq1WLc 維尼
不過⋯孝順也是不錯的主意,可令故事變得邪典一點8964 copyright protection446PENANA9wS3Lw4ReV 維尼
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強早已看上後母,但強父捷足先登,與之結婚8964 copyright protection446PENANARHOFO1vj3o 維尼
上有提及,後母年輕貌美8964 copyright protection446PENANARroXB0YJiW 維尼
強曾嘗試與後母曖昧,但被後母拒絕8964 copyright protection446PENANAQEdqIlvrB3 維尼
強不悅,為了報復強父搶走愛人,決定非物理殺害強父,即激死8964 copyright protection446PENANAhy1zyY2MWk 維尼
強先搞出一件喜事,即迫娟結婚,所謂迫,原因是強找人放火燒娟舖,令娟陷財政危機,被迫結婚8964 copyright protection446PENANAPr7ZK1zVn9 維尼
婚禮當日,強打算向強父展示後母出軌的證據,並稱已幫強父報仇,到時則向強父展示寶肚裡的孩子8964 copyright protection446PENANANNdmL4MZFg 維尼
所以寶除收到娟邀請做證婚人外,還收到強要脅,必須到來證婚,不然公開交配片段8964 copyright protection446PENANAMrNPIjG4cD 維尼
雖然寶的自殺,推倒了強的計劃,但強亦因此無須撫養B,自由自在等待遺產降臨,並可追求後母8964 copyright protection446PENANAbrjK1ruAMG 維尼
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但一切盡如強意嗎?不,娟的詛咒不是蓋的8964 copyright protection446PENANAUPEiI1LsdP 維尼
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寶在白車上實際想說的是「我要詛咒你⋯老公」而非要詛咒娟,但娟亦受此影響8964 copyright protection446PENANAmwJipab6qI 維尼
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