There have been so many great entries, it was hard to pick winners. So, before I list the winners, I want to give a more detailed review of each writers work. If you don't feel like reading it, feel free to skip to the end, where I will list the winners.698Please respect copyright.PENANAQwOB295eNM
RAMENNOODLESX: Well done, I really enjoyed reading this, there was plenty of details and lots of emotion and dialogue involved. It was a bit of a read, but well work it, right down to the end. I loved how you made it so that James was unable to touch anything tangible. Your portrayed your characters relationships well. Great Job.698Please respect copyright.PENANAE0fMc1bZNS
NAKYSHA: Well done, your approach and description of the afterlife in the beginning was interesting, and I like how you ended the story, with Jeff being able to watch his family, talk to his grandson and later be rejoined by his wife. Very touching, great job.698Please respect copyright.PENANAoJ6AsFs1fW
ElIZABETHBECKER: Well done, short but simple, and sometimes that is all that is needed. I like how Alexander decided not to use his 10 minutes,and it made sense for him to do so, in a way. Great job698Please respect copyright.PENANAoiCaUqQt4Z
BUBUWINTER:Well done, the way you took into perspective the halves was interesting, and caught my attention from early on. I love how he choose to say nothing at all, instead just giving her a push on the swing. The way that he died for his sister was very touching indeed. Great Job698Please respect copyright.PENANAxJLul0mG4f
SAR-LOW:Well done. Sometimes less is more, very touching story. Paints a nice simple image, while leaving room for imagination, great job698Please respect copyright.PENANABIH3NR7BF9
CORRUPTEDPURITY:Well done. I liked your approach of having the character look over and run through the available options. While a different approach than the other stories in the contest, i found it interesting that the character had not made a difference in anyone's life, which may have been better. Good descriptions, well done.698Please respect copyright.PENANAG3v9IcAagd
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Picking winners was hard. I took into consideration plot, grammar, spelling errors, and a few other basic things. Thank you for participating. 698Please respect copyright.PENANAX2gfqQsUcG
The Winners are:698Please respect copyright.PENANAi7hcuizSgb
First place:BUBUWINTER698Please respect copyright.PENANAajKAsRxVHC
Second Place:RAMENNOODLESX698Please respect copyright.PENANAjyMx4NBjkk
Third place:NAKYSHA698Please respect copyright.PENANAioRoMRwXvU
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