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這部非常著重畫面、人物設計上的描寫,以及重點在於敘述過去和現在兩邊的時間線來表達主角是誰。但是呢,我覺得可以用一下分隔線來表現,也可以分拆出幾話來表達過去和現在兩邊的時間線,這樣讀者看起來會更舒服。116Please respect copyright.PENANAW8m6lCW9lj
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