寂魚創挑語評專區 - 夏•冬眠《第六期#203》

《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型新詩
▌作者西帆

本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKyqCoQtBtp
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwB0rKfygcF
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXK5MR6DgnI
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYICYfxK6bA
而是是人在食用時能入口即化178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmpS8AGeYHS
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUcy0j7pTfG
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyNq0PwjXnO
使人不會因為時間的洪流178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaCg8gyI6ms
失去了炙熱178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs64hZ1Z6Cu
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDs2Tp2nKFo
但夏季怎麼會有雪178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlg9w7bV8uJ
令人加以反思178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8YI1vfO4kI
雪季不該有的畫面178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBjB6XVbilg
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpoa7lcMDv2
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或許178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwxw6UoDt5a
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjRZsL25HmV
即便是來年178Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhtVc3avZt1
之後的每一年都依然如此

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