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主打輕小說,前面文筆是輕小說,後面不像。8964 copyright protection83PENANAoCNjkX7XIZ 維尼
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前面設定很用心,跟以往比起來改很多,但是,身為讀者的我不會去細看,更不會去記。8964 copyright protection83PENANABFjapbvVuw 維尼
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