1. 講故事的差異458Please respect copyright.PENANAGeit69QHUZ
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡458Please respect copyright.PENANAVjsXdKjKs2
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)458Please respect copyright.PENANAOj3SAPkfel
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色458Please respect copyright.PENANAG4ivCto9NQ
看點:458Please respect copyright.PENANAPk0F4LYRmx
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動458Please respect copyright.PENANAyJxslurVez
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀458Please respect copyright.PENANA334Hn9jTTP
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅458Please respect copyright.PENANAthNvf02Y6w
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力458Please respect copyright.PENANA9Paa98DWaK
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾458Please respect copyright.PENANAtMl3fGVJeN
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)458Please respect copyright.PENANAW2ez1EW5v2
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點458Please respect copyright.PENANAFNQ0kV73nD
看點:458Please respect copyright.PENANA2VDnLR8Epw
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼458Please respect copyright.PENANA9sarMT6ck0
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事458Please respect copyright.PENANAGSPVrWjliD
c. 有趣的劇情458Please respect copyright.PENANA4pZjI7LYMB
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意458Please respect copyright.PENANAfaROYJcRj1
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾458Please respect copyright.PENANAlNywaDdSkG
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇458Please respect copyright.PENANAKqMxZkWmqS
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。458Please respect copyright.PENANAm2TeaXXG8e
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:458Please respect copyright.PENANA38JDdNKTRl
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。458Please respect copyright.PENANA8ctzndnf3J
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。458Please respect copyright.PENANAmXZ053kyXo
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷458Please respect copyright.PENANACmqbWPtYte
曾經搞錯過的賣點:458Please respect copyright.PENANAJ4aqBFHxLp
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。458Please respect copyright.PENANAT9U6fJGfQD
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。458Please respect copyright.PENANAAqcxVzbbxD
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。458Please respect copyright.PENANAWiwIvnFymV
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。458Please respect copyright.PENANAeFkTB7H57H
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。