1. 講故事的差異538Please respect copyright.PENANA5f5WbRYCdn
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡538Please respect copyright.PENANAQlbBsGyTwC
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)538Please respect copyright.PENANAwfrzOEMKaL
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色538Please respect copyright.PENANAqCoehkgplV
看點:538Please respect copyright.PENANAW8Az8Xbns1
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動538Please respect copyright.PENANADglDzFa0zz
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀538Please respect copyright.PENANAeR9S0XRZTn
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅538Please respect copyright.PENANAV9AK7rrMjt
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力538Please respect copyright.PENANA5fkBPBe5JG
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾538Please respect copyright.PENANA6kxXsQfys1
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)538Please respect copyright.PENANADp4tzAaMdc
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點538Please respect copyright.PENANANggz3hOv5d
看點:538Please respect copyright.PENANAQRJC6VT5sF
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼538Please respect copyright.PENANAKSnly6pMNR
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事538Please respect copyright.PENANAgGiMRA8sGE
c. 有趣的劇情538Please respect copyright.PENANAApViNF4Kj1
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意538Please respect copyright.PENANAdC5bAZKhOK
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾538Please respect copyright.PENANAHwLogY5RnQ
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇538Please respect copyright.PENANArGBFOplP10
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。538Please respect copyright.PENANAbpjdfiu60W
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:538Please respect copyright.PENANABSNi5Qfpc4
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。538Please respect copyright.PENANAZwqo4CvSrC
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。538Please respect copyright.PENANAy3jj7e10Re
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷538Please respect copyright.PENANAh2sUMzeKmt
曾經搞錯過的賣點:538Please respect copyright.PENANAC5YO08HjuZ
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。538Please respect copyright.PENANAym117GH1Eo
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。538Please respect copyright.PENANAkzvMBHVvhl
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。538Please respect copyright.PENANAQZrkvjboJn
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。538Please respect copyright.PENANAQA6hmGZ9Qt
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。