
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』270Please respect copyright.PENANAW0zyfhLieX
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:270Please respect copyright.PENANAjs3KlvSPq7
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐270Please respect copyright.PENANAkPaTVmBi80
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆270Please respect copyright.PENANAo6ZQJsOZql
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲270Please respect copyright.PENANAnRhE4KfCjY
帶出角色支線270Please respect copyright.PENANAukDmwMeoWA
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破270Please respect copyright.PENANAOWZ7OMeICp
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫270Please respect copyright.PENANA2x59DXZiuU
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴270Please respect copyright.PENANAth29WcmlNq
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌270Please respect copyright.PENANADU4lQTCvHm
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊270Please respect copyright.PENANA5dlPyyVALY
殺人犯vs富婆270Please respect copyright.PENANAJPdOcXi8w4
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌270Please respect copyright.PENANAJvyAv0Uq0X
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴270Please respect copyright.PENANANliDMgngkm
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕270Please respect copyright.PENANADqX1KrLCsy
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。270Please respect copyright.PENANAKmHbaQvS8I
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。270Please respect copyright.PENANAqQFxFNJWuz
魂之詩270Please respect copyright.PENANAgM4mnAjmFa
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