
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』331Please respect copyright.PENANAAzFZf4FEnt
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:331Please respect copyright.PENANAIhTgGsMoIu
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐331Please respect copyright.PENANAiKTpy26Lsw
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆331Please respect copyright.PENANA4sP1QD6kkV
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲331Please respect copyright.PENANA4kwD2YLky9
帶出角色支線331Please respect copyright.PENANAQfE72zqgcA
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破331Please respect copyright.PENANAmtDY44JFyK
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫331Please respect copyright.PENANASCykpDOsoh
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴331Please respect copyright.PENANA7s5XWfSz3x
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌331Please respect copyright.PENANAIh5vibtX3C
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊331Please respect copyright.PENANAscOOaNkhob
殺人犯vs富婆331Please respect copyright.PENANAyU6wfOUEmX
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌331Please respect copyright.PENANAKwvu2HmY8y
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴331Please respect copyright.PENANA95b90OeUCT
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕331Please respect copyright.PENANAvQGkFiuNXq
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。331Please respect copyright.PENANAJSmLaowgip
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。331Please respect copyright.PENANAz270Bkljbb
魂之詩331Please respect copyright.PENANAjkTp2BPNxZ
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