第1點335Please respect copyright.PENANAbEi33pbivh
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。335Please respect copyright.PENANAm0nSQekxSn
第2點335Please respect copyright.PENANAVN8RlvQOVg
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。335Please respect copyright.PENANA6L3RbDE5V1
第3點335Please respect copyright.PENANAXGfYVKTK7M
例如:335Please respect copyright.PENANAsNjKmjvlKq
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。335Please respect copyright.PENANAdOAbJXHVbd
「嗯──」335Please respect copyright.PENANAC9UTc1eo9X
「該怎麼辦呢?」335Please respect copyright.PENANAcutzIYjFB5
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。335Please respect copyright.PENANAFQsinNymQV
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」335Please respect copyright.PENANACR2QA1mSax
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。335Please respect copyright.PENANAXAm2CUvbfs
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。335Please respect copyright.PENANAzpDJbChN8v
例如:335Please respect copyright.PENANAdpGqEXTFEp
米莉亞拿到一封信。335Please respect copyright.PENANAm02EGwI6rO
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」335Please respect copyright.PENANAhjyHnI02wM
三河願表示。335Please respect copyright.PENANA6VIp2tU2d7
「那可是一封情書耶。」335Please respect copyright.PENANAbQgXEtZ16R
第4點335Please respect copyright.PENANAPXmFrcw7Qe
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。335Please respect copyright.PENANAaCpnJEA4Es