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恕我無禮，這個故事我真的看不下去
ENTRY #16
Author: 星雨夜
Published:
Feb 28, 2024
恕我無禮，這個故事我真的看不下去
Published:
Feb 28, 2024
ENTRY #16
心累……
Author: 星雨夜
Published:
Feb 28, 2024
1 Min Read
147 Words
No Plagiarism!ir46XcsZaFjLH09aEV1zposted on PＥNAＮＡ

類型：不好說。

篇幅：長篇

吐槽點：647Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTwo3XTwyTt

光看簡介就不知道在寫什麼，一點都勾引不起興趣，除非耐下性子習慣一下才行。647Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡntIFLGuilK

標籤貼史詩，嗯，好像一點都沒有感覺呢！整體看來大概就前面鋪陳太久，光看過場設定的文字大概就飽了，我真的要多多唸經才行呢！

雖然感覺作者想要埋一些伏筆，但看到後面真的會忘記填坑的期待感。647Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtKbrDdlOC9

優點：大概還算能理解的文字，交代的還算清楚。

216.73.216.113

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