100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrjTNeDsS1V
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以怪物為主題：83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ60Lx8D2dWi
創挑還沒有結果啊！83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRe3aDdHqzC
有了嗎？83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwTBSGYChtp
還沒啊……83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGYeOL9v1gJ
怎麼還沒呢？83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbcy3x6XMDW
怎麼呢……83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR8UsK6k0cP
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡASbk8zlpmQ
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMrHCDfN6eC
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDcUkI3MPGM
今天會把報告交上來吧？83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGhHuqjw4Hl
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZz8mf1EXeE
啊！有怪獸！83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIGHe9nfvL6
哪裡？那裡？83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg0xLdTsDCs
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3HRupTlmTi
就在你你我的時間裡！83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCQHGPs68si
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ286h2NwGll
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～83Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5oR7E6Wryl
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