《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧240Please respect copyright.PENANAG1l8h2Y6XG
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍240Please respect copyright.PENANAvUU6TI0VWa
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)240Please respect copyright.PENANAch8f9bB29J
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單240Please respect copyright.PENANAbCbOTFwdiZ
而是是人在食用時能入口即化240Please respect copyright.PENANALKTvvaxvUE
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」240Please respect copyright.PENANAyscKuEAz1e
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久240Please respect copyright.PENANAhDAQ8JDD13
使人不會因為時間的洪流240Please respect copyright.PENANAgDnKIADXYH
失去了炙熱240Please respect copyright.PENANAcds6YLvQ9T
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》240Please respect copyright.PENANAvOzC0JwgFz
但夏季怎麼會有雪240Please respect copyright.PENANAYHXwYE8n0Y
令人加以反思240Please respect copyright.PENANAF8hSs94Hms
雪季不該有的畫面240Please respect copyright.PENANArAu7ccg1ba
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏240Please respect copyright.PENANAHz1jVXFFtG
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或許240Please respect copyright.PENANAnn8NCeBy8j
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣240Please respect copyright.PENANAn6SXib1vEy
即便是來年240Please respect copyright.PENANAxLMgC6223o
之後的每一年都依然如此