作者妳好726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWxWj3uDeFZ
受到妳的邀请726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMx8Xx9PLbD
稍微看了下这本佩姬726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPNKAiU0iR0
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSR7mAMBGqP
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZzIpW6HBMN
现世一堆东西726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBkkMQFYhCq
其实就很简单一个道理726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgTCHE4C7B1
主角想要被爱726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBaPEZqtyTm
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4CrnWbOzJx
男主卢克爱726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPlakzHKGSP
主角就爱回去726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2zRaqhbo2G
女主伊莎爱726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkNs1KKiGjL
主角就爱回去726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTK0PiZCTQ7
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuajOJlvIlx
想要被爱是佩姬的主题726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBVNAN8nlFK
主角性别不是问题726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡngEl8OM5ON
内心冲突不是问题726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAjHnGguJAY
主角被爱就迎刃而解726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPUqHOAx3JZ
看不懂这点整部书就看不了726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5ePqtgAHDI
妳的书乏人问津是这道理726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvokjJvyOTy
作者妳说主角口是心非726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRX0NOpZjrM
欸我说这不对726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNAHn4SymOw
这明摆着口非心也非726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUoSG6904Jw
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7t6xSVffND
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0C4BVuc0Io
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuISd40hJKB
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTL59gfcQEE
为了被爱726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg5MN7t0UHG
连原本的性别都不要了726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡegNt6A9bnH
这主角疯的傻的726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7gofqYujkO
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkQou2GA5bC
女主伊莎726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpNyAIJsgZ3
单纯的色鬼726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHJPfU6lI1D
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM9ag9CSzAa
黑化可能
艾德兰726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVUvcmNPaVH
可怜虫阿726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrKECTEvCq0
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBLGdbFahmV
妳说解释不够726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUmE2ObIFxN
我到觉得清楚726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo6ZbvYVD8f
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlopk51oYGe
他为啥强726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJMiO3VPL8L
妳啥都没讲726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwnceI6Wghe
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡslxIhY0LMQ
也是除主角外最明白的角色726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwStfwR2QlU
她就拿来爱主角的726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiJzTm13228
功能性角色
还有其他许多726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXlST3m2Lqp
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcj26Qjh44o
可以瞧见妳的苦心726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ49tFEEl1Is
我觉得这没必要726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGtU77L4Pdo
好的台词提一次够了726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz8NgILmmIJ
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKsa0ajpU53
我倒嫌设定囉嗦726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz5UiaZtpVS
空白很重要726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4o8v8qNK0r
没明白有没明白的好处726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp5CxDrLBji
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1tfl3BO8dS
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqyPBoWWkgG
我还会继续看的726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm8Vk6Nsytc
确实好看726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgNswVKaufq
希望你这能写完726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg1zbwrTLk4
能放上起点不726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiuXDMfACTr
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsCbnub1E4S
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm4apklKEa9
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYaFjRvPZZS
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbOx0AzqzZP
感謝你的評文726Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIkxw5iOq6v
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