作者妳好832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuU3dK2AWx1
受到妳的邀请832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqoOxBH5sQ7
稍微看了下这本佩姬832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ17y2J7xA1w
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfcE1r598fM
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF69MWjae0l
现世一堆东西832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHvOqjypqU7
其实就很简单一个道理832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7vzKRs0DWQ
主角想要被爱832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvkS0wRtgbI
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB4GL0afPi3
男主卢克爱832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUKo4ms6xVu
主角就爱回去832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcQz6TjqxC2
女主伊莎爱832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjMSnVQgELA
主角就爱回去832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaAuhHMQplx
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyLiDUKYClB
想要被爱是佩姬的主题832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdqKxgkjaQ7
主角性别不是问题832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ38oxjMMbTu
内心冲突不是问题832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP2tBCskOE4
主角被爱就迎刃而解832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡanPwunbgad
看不懂这点整部书就看不了832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbpsLa3sdg3
妳的书乏人问津是这道理832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZdZBaEyCEL
作者妳说主角口是心非832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq1HkQzS8H0
欸我说这不对832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiw6X4gCiQT
这明摆着口非心也非832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5o8sjNyjw5
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuEpmVcLfTq
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZrDPo4a3r7
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeOHflrpsbJ
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlZTr4y3MxU
为了被爱832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNvGufIxdcW
连原本的性别都不要了832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZU0O4kOFOM
这主角疯的傻的832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSItmuOYm2J
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzsiJkIYThL
女主伊莎832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpQqpGuPG63
单纯的色鬼832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrD0YHZcKm7
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs0J0nJgYmT
黑化可能
艾德兰832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR4a66yTGue
可怜虫阿832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbIA5NZtIzf
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCfx0kvRM3L
妳说解释不够832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpNlrC5ohn3
我到觉得清楚832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRznXwbMafJ
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrUXEd09OMm
他为啥强832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtXiZ30XyUD
妳啥都没讲832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8cmT9CzBt3
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI5C0Q9TVZc
也是除主角外最明白的角色832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRZKPUxNRZF
她就拿来爱主角的832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxCV0oPCDmO
功能性角色
还有其他许多832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq2IKdjjjM4
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvpd9PpNq2j
可以瞧见妳的苦心832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgN8ruJNymV
我觉得这没必要832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvpgYIP8Jdu
好的台词提一次够了832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1jHtwD0BLR
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIovG0hyBEb
我倒嫌设定囉嗦832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY6KR0kDt2S
空白很重要832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhIUAQvof8G
没明白有没明白的好处832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI33etbt5U4
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgNcnwWH7nr
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7BwHXXLRP2
我还会继续看的832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBgFIAdhYhS
确实好看832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGPNQpn63Qk
希望你这能写完832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1EO9NTqixt
能放上起点不832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgS5ao7XGpk
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjWRwAVZxse
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，832Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm0URb9IrrO
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