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評論我的小說 第二期
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Author: 月鬼
Published:
May 3, 2025
評論我的小說 第二期
Published:
May 3, 2025
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Author: 月鬼
Published:
May 3, 2025
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No Plagiarism!l9rgA4AoqyjdASrornxoposted on PＥNAＮＡ

喔給~學習大致上的事情都完成一半了，要繼續來做對我自己的書評🤩

有問題，儘管批評，本人會聽，很愛聽感想😆

因為很好玩（？😏

目前出到第二個小說，還在構思中，今天希望大家能夠稍微評論一下第一個小說跟第二個小說

主題都是BL，但是換了一個角度，是腐女眼裡的BL

歡迎評論，歡迎評論~

好像賣菜老闆（？

Anyway，第一篇提到的問題點第二部正在更改中です

蠻想聽到其他想法的，歡迎提出😆🤩🤩🤩😆

尤其是對故事內容的感想😆

太嗨了，sorry.😐 

目前第二部累積到888觀看了！但沒有人評論覺得很可惜，故開設此活動！

越多人越好☺️

那麼就拜託各位了！！

237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ522B3fAF7F

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