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自新之路
ISSUE #12
Author: 離躁
Published:
Apr 7, 2022
自新之路
Author: 離躁
Published:
Apr 7, 2022
ISSUE #12
你這傢伙，看書不是要劃下你認同句子，而是啟發你的句子啊
No Plagiarism!guXFJvDDbJ7EdMTkrkMpposted on PＥNAＮＡ

剛才背了三個lectures的內容，雖可默寫出內容，腦子裡卻還是像沒被知識污染過一樣。都說有招勝無招，這大概說明我和張無忌一樣，都融會貫通了太極拳的精髓吧。待我下週考試把所有東西忘清光時，就是大概是稱霸學術界的時候了？統一江湖，千秋大業，指日可待！90Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP7vbNIOqwj

看完書後腦袋空空如也說明我有繼承武當派的潛質。那吃完晚餐肚子感覺空空如也要繼承什麼？只能是我媽的冰箱了。90Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdBOORybPgX

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雖可默寫出內容，卻感覺腦子裡像是一片空白般，.....

雖然可默寫出內容，腦子裡卻什麼都想不到，......

有時寫作時下意識想村上春樹會怎麼安排句子結構，寫了上面第一句後刪改了幾個字，第二句子好像比較像村上被翻譯後的文風。這樣一比較，發現他沒有把 “（我）感覺” 這些自己主觀的感受放在前面，反而直接把自己想表達的內容的主語放在前面。意思差不多，看起上來卻簡潔很多，重點也清楚一點。

當然，以上都是感覺出來的，村上是不是真的這麼寫我還真不知道。

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