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書評活動 - 漫讀原力《天玉無疆-我係Freelance殭屍獵人-》
ENTRY #2
Author: 達文西遊記
Published:
Apr 23, 2022
書評活動 - 漫讀原力《天玉無疆-我係Freelance殭屍獵人-》
Published:
Apr 23, 2022
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粵語入文，配合故事創意及流暢度，一樣可以成為好小說
Author: 達文西遊記
Published:
Apr 23, 2022
1 Min Read
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第一次認真睇下粵語入文的小說，比想像中流暢易讀，但用粵語寫都有一個問題暫時未解決到，就係好多同音但唔同寫法的字，未有稍為正式的規範，尤其係啲語氣助語，每個人用法可能有啲唔同，無對或錯，但見到同自己用得唔同就可能未係好習慣。

故事方面，我認為頗有創意，需要有好多新的諗法去創造呢個彊屍世界，整體都營造到；情節方面亦都算流暢，好快帶到入主題同埋無拖泥帶水。

不過有時我自己稍為覺得太多解釋，某啲位其實唔洗解釋得咁白，讀者自己都可以自己推斷到，咁樣又可以增加故事的暢快度。

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