No Plagiarism!pwnqYZAnDU5E1cH04Kqaposted on PENANA 那個,我回來囉!8964 copyright protection129PENANASnR2Z9HS6G 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAI9313N0Qb8
8964 copyright protection129PENANAIYbGrbn2jK 維尼
從台灣搭飛機回香港後回到家裡,吃完晚飯已經差不多11點了。8964 copyright protection129PENANAaUtneazMtq 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANADUQt81OKkq
8964 copyright protection129PENANAh65O9fmTL4 維尼
啟動電腦的時候,看到屏幕竟然有點不習慣呢!8964 copyright protection129PENANA5ivi7U5xMm 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAJ6lTYNWoCe
8964 copyright protection129PENANAGf232QFyum 維尼
要整理一個星期沒打掃的家、收拾行李和伴手禮,去完旅行要做的事情真多呢!今天的日記就只可以水更新(抱歉了。)8964 copyright protection129PENANAlzdV5B0rip 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAhv7pXrTJdh
8964 copyright protection129PENANA7qBh3CibJp 維尼
這個星期,心得募集又多了幾篇新投稿。我都有看,當下體會到充滿缺點的自己,打擊也十分大。感覺好像,自己寫了差不多10年的垃圾呢。8964 copyright protection129PENANA3Ef6EyuL6v 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANASQPp5Ck1U7
8964 copyright protection129PENANAdD0zLv6y9Q 維尼
我的問題可以統整為以下幾點吧:133Please respect copyright.PENANAKkfw43jZgX
8964 copyright protection129PENANAt1sYZi2T8F 維尼
不合理的劇情8964 copyright protection129PENANAGQjBqyLQju 維尼
節奏過慢8964 copyright protection129PENANAoJ4zxWQNUb 維尼
碎片化、平淡、日常化、欠缺張力的劇情8964 copyright protection129PENANAD1FEp5rxGJ 維尼
角色形象不鮮明8964 copyright protection129PENANASj5tGvBcoq 維尼
第一、第三人稱紊亂8964 copyright protection129PENANA8zMZ1PJzQq 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAOqDdkrI0MG
8964 copyright protection129PENANALmYaB199pH 維尼
另外,旅行的時候我認真想過,到底要寫怎樣的小說。8964 copyright protection129PENANABidiYYyYcM 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAwBuT126shf
8964 copyright protection129PENANAAYiQFD1kMP 維尼
『你只要做回自己就好了。』8964 copyright protection129PENANAEeQggE61Ou 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAE9XTZ45YJG
8964 copyright protection129PENANAqHE2Smjacn 維尼
用心寫自己的小說,自然就會得到知音的認同。8964 copyright protection129PENANAqW0m6o1Wfo 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAvhqkKGE1nO
8964 copyright protection129PENANAZKMM59xG04 維尼
然後,新的故事避免犯上以上的錯誤就好了。寫壞了兩本小說,以後盡可能不讓小說變得垃圾就好了。8964 copyright protection129PENANAUTsQaQPBnN 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANA3oajjJDbra
8964 copyright protection129PENANAF1JIaN2ZqX 維尼
說著說著,現在就很晚了。我滿桌都是從台灣買回來的東西。8964 copyright protection129PENANA0atkOTpoiV 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAwALzgIabqk
8964 copyright protection129PENANAHIQtsJnGfm 維尼
陸續會寫遊記和飛行報告。8964 copyright protection129PENANAcTRpc1xzLW 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAvCb6Mt00Zf
8964 copyright protection129PENANAeCuYmZuNpw 維尼
心得募集那裡,我盡量每天回覆一篇,也歡迎大家繼續投稿喔。讓大家久等,抱歉了。8964 copyright protection129PENANAdMmnJFTFTC 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAydkVzXsMQ6
8964 copyright protection129PENANAJKuUE6IpHh 維尼
至於小說,目前努力靠寫日記摸鍵盤重拾手感。8964 copyright protection129PENANAYcdZPgZ4wN 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAYMqgqTefeN
8964 copyright protection129PENANAQNM0gsI3so 維尼
今天就到這裡吧。晚安。8964 copyright protection129PENANA6aoilH10gC 維尼
133Please respect copyright.PENANAUXa9E1bZFf
8964 copyright protection129PENANAO54wXVm46J 維尼
172.69.6.93
ns 172.69.6.93da2