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《這個臥底不對勁》意見回饋
ENTRY #4
Author: 櫻
Published:
Apr 3, 2022
《這個臥底不對勁》意見回饋
Published:
Apr 3, 2022
ENTRY #4
小意見
Author: 櫻
Published:
Apr 3, 2022
1 Min Read
154 Words
No Plagiarism!4VR2SQyTydCvOtMzOQ5Oposted on PＥNAＮＡ

Q1：第十五章

Q2：淺川森～～有一點陰暗的感覺

Q3：討厭的人物嘛⋯⋯目前還沒有，感覺每個角色的設定都挺好

Q4：看作者啦～～如果因為讀者的想法而改變故事後續的發展，強行令故事變長或者變短，反而會很容易爛尾

Q5：跟Q4一樣，還是看作者，每章三千字左右我覺得挺好的，不會說太短又或者是太長搞到不想看

Q6：個人熱衷於BE（bad ending），但感覺這篇是happy ending的話好像也還不錯

Q7：完全沒問題～～～

172.70.100.37

ns 172.70.100.37da2
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