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催春穀雨曉窗晴,細草含煙漸滿城。
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盡占飛花隨酒興,時聞古驛送車聲。
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裁成麗日新詩短,散作東風舊事輕。
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野水浮沉忽卅載,何如守拙效淵明。
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七言律詩,押平聲庚韻,首句入韻。
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時序一過穀雨,也就漸漸告別了春季。推窗迎來雨後初晴,細草與晨霧悄然漫過整座城市。來不及傷感春逝,攜酒遊賞一樹花開,彷彿要霸占所有美景。舊車站不時傳來列車鳴笛,但我並未親見。久久回老家一趟最宜提筆寫詩,願吾詩如春日般短促美麗,而舊憶雜緒都化作輕風飄散。年歲似流水,轉眼已臨近三十,為了餬口而與世浮沉,怎能不嚮往歸隱田園的生活呢?
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許久未更新了,倒不是這段時日毫無靈感,只是積了一些創作未搬運至蕉園。最近也許會慢慢補上吧。234Please respect copyright.PENANAS6l2msHIli
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首次嘗試倒裝句式,頸聯本該寫作「新詩裁成麗日短,舊事散作東風輕」,除了符合聲律之必須,也為追求錯落參差之美。敝帚自珍,在我所寫詩詞中,此句應暫列自評前五。
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