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新詩&短篇小品文
ISSUE #2
Author: shadow 11
新詩&短篇小品文
Author: shadow 11
ISSUE #2
《救贖》 作者：Shadow 11
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幽暗的漆黑吞噬著天空，冰冷的雨滴落下，在耳邊發出滴答滴答的聲響561Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDQexRW2t5k

雨下了，一滴一滴的落下在我的肩上

光明的世界變得幽暗

彷彿給予生命絕望般，毫無光明和救贖

人群的嘻笑像是在嘲弄著我的愚蠢

一聲一聲的徘徊耳中

561Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaEkspkG6cC

揮之不去

如洪水襲來一般在我腦中掀起波瀾

水淹至腰，死亡逼近，可我終究等不到那個我所期待的人

塔塔、塔塔

急促的腳步和那水流湍急交織在一起

我分不清那究竟是希望還是死亡的交響曲

你說，是天空對我的救贖，抑或是，你對我的不挽留

216.73.216.164

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新詩&短篇小品文
Poetry
Short Story
Last updated: May 3, 2022
Total word count: 1,572
Total reading time: 5 Minutes
Writer:
shadow 11
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