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寂寞魚的書評專區
Author:
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寂寞魚的書評專區
Author:
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ISSUE #28
也許我還會夢見你
No Plagiarism!NodJRxnCtIkreLP8FDxrposted on PENANA 作品:【魚魚創挑第六期】那年盛夏,曾經的約定8964 copyright protection393PENANARjnqy358Pu 維尼
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類型:小說8964 copyright protection393PENANAyLYydQd4JB 維尼
作者:柏木桐柊8964 copyright protection393PENANAOQszkhv6rj 維尼
▌結語心得397Please respect copyright.PENANAVcNgpMl2K4
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或許,她的影跡已成過往。窗櫺映入柔情似水,而匯聚成今夜的輾轉難眠。397Please respect copyright.PENANATHd9P1lg4C
我望不及妳眼底的星空漫步,而夏季裡還仍猶存妳餘溫。妳說的那些在我的世界又算得是什麼,留下的不過是在保險櫃裡的一抹笑意。我早已分不清,夏日我倆是否曾約定過,而捧上手中代表著祝福的黃玫瑰。397Please respect copyright.PENANADhlgbN1iLk
這不代表著我倆有過曾經。夏夜裡。獨自釀著夢中還偶然遇見的妳。397Please respect copyright.PENANAl4XeHfG4n8
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柏木桐柊,在短短數筆之下,運用了大量的暗喻及景色來比擬離情的傷感。醪、櫺兩字都是極其罕見的同義字,在詩句之間也靈活運用自己的特色8964 copyright protection393PENANADF10mGpzfm 維尼
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