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情緒匯流的地方--遺世
ISSUE #6
Author: 尚昜
Published:
May 8, 2022
情緒匯流的地方--遺世
Author: 尚昜
Published:
May 8, 2022
ISSUE #6
飄落(極短篇)
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窗外的雨飄得輕柔，我卻落得沉重。

滴滴答答的黏膩，揉成了昨日的我。

　　

我停在她面前，看著她將那照片捂在胸口，顫抖。

最後一眼，我想。

　　

街上的雨落得沉重，我卻飄得輕柔。

淅淅瀝瀝的雨聲，送別了今天的我。

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我想你了，她說。

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVbIlbrEyv8

作者的閒言閒語：

有點抽象，不知道大家看不看得懂「我」的結局……。

怎麼說，就，我還是不想主動解釋內容，好像應該要給讀者留一點點動腦的空間…總之，有人不懂再問吧。

其實，「不要把讀者當成笨蛋」這個是我覺得蠻多人都會忽略的點，這也算是寫作時重要的概念之一吧，老實說，大部分讀者都比寫作的人本身對文字的感受還要來得敏銳和清晰。

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情緒匯流的地方--遺世
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Last updated: May 17, 2022
Total word count: 3,746
Total reading time: 12 Minutes
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