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你寫小說我來評 2
ENTRY #29
Author: 魂楓
Published:
Jan 27, 2022
你寫小說我來評 2
Published:
Jan 27, 2022
ENTRY #29
《武玄傳說》/魂楓/連載中
Author: 魂楓
Published:
Jan 27, 2022
1 Min Read
375 Words
No Plagiarism!TxZcg10aruIylbDVoRAaposted on PＥNAＮＡ

作品名稱：點我看《武玄傳說》

連載狀態：連載中/每週日更新

類型：玄幻、奇幻、非龍傲天

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簡介：

「武玄征戰千不休，傳奇真王終降臨。」​​​

武玄大陸遭逢異變，天地局勢將重新輪轉，位面的平衡將被打破。

在無數逆境中靠著決心撐下去，一步步走向巔峰。​​​​

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一句話簡介：

靠著決心與行動不斷變強而不是無腦開掛輾壓。

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理念：

◆非龍傲天作品，主角沒有輕易輾壓一切的實力

◆世界觀龐大，不同角色間富有特色的能力

◆不是後宮、外掛系統、獨自升級、開無雙之類的......

希望這部作品能帶給讀者愉悅、緊張和刺激

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看法：

◇由於目前連載進度還在故事前期，世界觀還不大，希望能在前期也不會讓讀者感到無趣與厭煩。

◇希望能夠知道自己在敘述事情是否會過多或過少，又能如何改進？

◇故事節奏掌握的如何？

◇角色個性是否讓人感覺鮮明？有沒有不合理的行為？

◇故事中是否有矛盾或無法理解的部分？

◇其他不足的部分......

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因為想讓自己更好，剛好在DC看到這則創挑就來參加了~XD

丟出了一大堆問題不知道會不會造成困擾......

最後感謝星塵舉辦這次的評文活動，辛苦了！

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