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這個是我在上國文課時，老師說到孟子的人有四端中的看到落井小孩一定會去救的時候突然想到的一個小故事w

第一次嘗試寫短篇還是疑似鬼故事的東西😂本身文筆也不太好～所以其實沒有營造出想要的那種氛圍。

如果有人知道怎樣可以改得更好的話可以跟我說一下嗎🥺）語氣好官方XDDD我在努力正經(´･ω･`)

恐怖等級：半星

詭異等級：一星

屬於不可怕的那種美好的故事呦～

它屬於短篇的大綱文

大約500字左右吧w

所以各位走過路過有興趣的可以順便點進去看一下（？

我超需要傳說中的寫作指導啊啊啊啊啊

ps.我把它分成了兩種版本，一個有加上我寫的時候內心的一點os一個沒有。看起來是差不多的，所以其實不是重複發w

）封面是我無聊亂畫的一張蹦蹦👀嚴格來說跟這篇文一點關係都沒有。



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