相信自己的直覺,有時靈光一閃的念頭,比深思熟慮的結果更令人拍案驚奇。因為心血來潮的靈感放棄一個月的進度也是常有的事。當時亦然,直覺認為劇本尚有不足,我就相信直覺而停筆,重新審視故事。
首先是第十八章的部份,重頭戲是昌因為大小姐毀容而自責,覺得自己能力不足而拖累大小姐,崩潰痛哭,顯示昌柔弱的一面。然而大小姐沒有責備昌,突顯二人的牽絆堅如磐石。173Please respect copyright.PENANAXOw7w4n3PK
舊作『在樹林裡的她』寫過類似的劇情,理應很容易掌握才對,是甚麼在妨礙我呢?173Please respect copyright.PENANAGN0EGpbAGb
昌:「是我。」173Please respect copyright.PENANAemZxZnNzBR
甚麼!?173Please respect copyright.PENANAEaMGfMAD6K
昌:「是小看我嗎?你這隻軟體生物。我才不會為了此等小事就崩潰。說,我的靈感原型是誰。」
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(羅貝爾特+法夫尼爾)x沃爾特÷2,比起女僕,執事的成份比較高。173Please respect copyright.PENANAj5X2MmgmRs
昌:「這算大小姐變成了他媽哥池,依然面不改容鞠躬盡瘁才是真正的女僕吧。」173Please respect copyright.PENANAhW11Or9j6N
你的執念也太重!不過,這的確符合你的設定啦。173Please respect copyright.PENANAR3yqpDaaOq
昌:「知道就馬上把故事重寫,你這隻章魚。」173Please respect copyright.PENANAyKgyiC03Vq
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可惡的高腳七,一針見血打出大暴擊,令人無法反駁。那麼,將劇本這樣改一改——改到就有鬼啦!完全沒有靈感啊!173Please respect copyright.PENANAeYdc6SVxk2
我不寫了!JoJo!173Please respect copyright.PENANAgualowk4EH
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昌:「你不是還有CP要推嗎?」173Please respect copyright.PENANA9O2hwqWRw3
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那就,暫時休筆!173Please respect copyright.PENANAqa8DAjKH3o
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24/12/2021
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