
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』269Please respect copyright.PENANAUGQoqrMdbn
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:269Please respect copyright.PENANAQRCAuckwUy
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐269Please respect copyright.PENANAJn7oKmYGQc
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆269Please respect copyright.PENANAbjCsCnxq99
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲269Please respect copyright.PENANATfUFX0ELje
帶出角色支線269Please respect copyright.PENANAItJuJiXjSc
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破269Please respect copyright.PENANA84GrXUE4du
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫269Please respect copyright.PENANAf77ep0mSzl
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴269Please respect copyright.PENANAfFNm3vAqtr
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌269Please respect copyright.PENANASrpWvXS0fj
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊269Please respect copyright.PENANAch2sLloDT0
殺人犯vs富婆269Please respect copyright.PENANA8PT5ufcAML
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌269Please respect copyright.PENANAU4LenFBPb9
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴269Please respect copyright.PENANATEOMEvMaIF
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕269Please respect copyright.PENANAw0HXazNmDm
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。269Please respect copyright.PENANArrBiHLWSnS
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。269Please respect copyright.PENANAEjBHnEPQLH
魂之詩269Please respect copyright.PENANAO4DRYkHc2D
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