
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』335Please respect copyright.PENANAeeNIMrrr0a
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:335Please respect copyright.PENANAH95dDtpefq
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐335Please respect copyright.PENANAuAv6YFoay8
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆335Please respect copyright.PENANAHgWVtmztqR
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲335Please respect copyright.PENANAOl4mo4IkLu
帶出角色支線335Please respect copyright.PENANAb6iJZ5UcFg
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破335Please respect copyright.PENANAtj719Z9fcc
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫335Please respect copyright.PENANA4cZLjOzff4
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴335Please respect copyright.PENANAIdHCEloXCf
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌335Please respect copyright.PENANAHHBs9RvQrq
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊335Please respect copyright.PENANAzYsvQwklv8
殺人犯vs富婆335Please respect copyright.PENANAigXqvgkHpT
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌335Please respect copyright.PENANABBFaUyFdID
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴335Please respect copyright.PENANARTSWzSPAAH
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕335Please respect copyright.PENANAU0h1enlzny
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。335Please respect copyright.PENANAvEUos3lvTW
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。335Please respect copyright.PENANAZX7unAfCuA
魂之詩335Please respect copyright.PENANAfclHLaD1Fk
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