昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』145Please respect copyright.PENANAmY7tiCt8hU
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:145Please respect copyright.PENANAi3Jw4T8uzF
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐145Please respect copyright.PENANAE8fcmH8oQG
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆145Please respect copyright.PENANAecJF2Ra0Xz
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲145Please respect copyright.PENANA4pCwBKYy9i
帶出角色支線145Please respect copyright.PENANAKIar79POJq
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破145Please respect copyright.PENANACVClA9vY0f
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫145Please respect copyright.PENANAZVIbbac7SU
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴145Please respect copyright.PENANA60NcUc4YPB
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌145Please respect copyright.PENANAVSEWwnER0D
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊145Please respect copyright.PENANAuScQfeZPF2
殺人犯vs富婆145Please respect copyright.PENANARWTxUd5gqU
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌145Please respect copyright.PENANAoEYi38JjPw
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴145Please respect copyright.PENANAgiwLt5gDbp
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕145Please respect copyright.PENANAWaeXZDokLx
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。145Please respect copyright.PENANAcp4o5sXUje
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。145Please respect copyright.PENANASmPekyT7Q0
魂之詩145Please respect copyright.PENANAFhaV8BbbWO
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