
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』345Please respect copyright.PENANA9quloSQ9wk
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:345Please respect copyright.PENANA8sVzojC3yN
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐345Please respect copyright.PENANAToOSnkFpZi
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆345Please respect copyright.PENANAoz7HXgRLvY
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲345Please respect copyright.PENANA7mHuqSixES
帶出角色支線345Please respect copyright.PENANA6S4phUKEx7
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破345Please respect copyright.PENANAqazHPCrpRn
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫345Please respect copyright.PENANAAZJorlEw2q
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴345Please respect copyright.PENANAofgmy6j0ro
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌345Please respect copyright.PENANAdhvpcpLcs4
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊345Please respect copyright.PENANA5glw5f0sOa
殺人犯vs富婆345Please respect copyright.PENANAUJBqjfRlCf
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌345Please respect copyright.PENANAKOyJ7SdlaQ
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴345Please respect copyright.PENANABRRCzRd3Yq
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕345Please respect copyright.PENANAMhVIJ9wxPa
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。345Please respect copyright.PENANApPrv2rxaz5
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。345Please respect copyright.PENANAtJtqTIHsYs
魂之詩345Please respect copyright.PENANAB43uUpWUH4
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