我的未來日誌與作品 - Day17-3D八爪魚【魂之詩】

昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜，好睏(死

接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部：『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqWPiUmpLVR

四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場，將眾人打散重組成小團體，達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間，這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花，結果是點子很散，沒有流暢的起承轉合，以下是想到的橋段：480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoqJNtVdgru

紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUfW8Rs9HA3
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3xJwaOlg9s

智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtwv4trI7gl
帶出角色支線480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuBcVbeiuae

友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwRtpo3Huh5
危險的百合香

櫻安熊發現倉庫480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡus7mDSRJu4
主線

初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtmELgM0Lps
證明大小姐真意

祐嘉質問昌480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7z8lUgAuk9
祐嘉對紅楓的信任

紅楓與大小姐閒聊480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡASL9Nh0gf4
殺人犯vs富婆480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh1Vt0Sx80t

一輪深思後，將以上點子整合成四個章節：

1 祐嘉質問昌480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLMdd5uydEQ
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ29cQzPkHhv
3 智賀玩遊戲，友梨亞里割腕480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbwFJRc3mHF
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫，初秋打哈哈

基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹，實際内容是邊寫邊想的。480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnVCNsNmlQi
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuVa0tRmEyS

魂之詩480Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwN4gtYtMLB

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