
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』288Please respect copyright.PENANAHJP4i1r84P
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:288Please respect copyright.PENANA5mDdgcKa7L
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐288Please respect copyright.PENANA9VTJ5Vz2Qw
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆288Please respect copyright.PENANAEQGayY3Oup
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲288Please respect copyright.PENANA57nnoso3j8
帶出角色支線288Please respect copyright.PENANAHFzAiwJEC2
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破288Please respect copyright.PENANA6Spoj3QQc4
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫288Please respect copyright.PENANA2x4aVqX5w8
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴288Please respect copyright.PENANAPLgYFM30F0
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌288Please respect copyright.PENANA4DNFRxXZRm
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊288Please respect copyright.PENANAyAbG7qJeKL
殺人犯vs富婆288Please respect copyright.PENANAC3ygsBuJO1
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌288Please respect copyright.PENANAsJZrHWXxjc
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴288Please respect copyright.PENANAmzJAU0FKqX
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕288Please respect copyright.PENANAOVaPAMuVYb
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。288Please respect copyright.PENANA2VFsPeWWJy
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。288Please respect copyright.PENANARKS97AgtRV
魂之詩288Please respect copyright.PENANAk0A3RzL2FJ
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