
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』310Please respect copyright.PENANAItZJwwRLXh
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:310Please respect copyright.PENANAgkoXrnEXYD
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐310Please respect copyright.PENANA2nyxpnH3fa
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆310Please respect copyright.PENANAyc0KKipA3R
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲310Please respect copyright.PENANAt8MOzGUKxk
帶出角色支線310Please respect copyright.PENANAgE2hfRSOog
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破310Please respect copyright.PENANAbDGdToPK5q
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫310Please respect copyright.PENANAP9rgvF7l1n
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴310Please respect copyright.PENANAUNRUL0gqqy
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌310Please respect copyright.PENANA79fGkJCNus
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊310Please respect copyright.PENANAxcPQK6AXZG
殺人犯vs富婆310Please respect copyright.PENANAxwJfx0K2qw
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌310Please respect copyright.PENANAkmrYON8U5M
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴310Please respect copyright.PENANAwD65UB9y2G
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕310Please respect copyright.PENANAglEgixtPYg
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。310Please respect copyright.PENANAPEdB0srUSz
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。310Please respect copyright.PENANAOJjsLCv1KR
魂之詩310Please respect copyright.PENANAyiZyyDes1x
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