
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』246Please respect copyright.PENANA86zQ296GF2
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:246Please respect copyright.PENANAI7zBZKPS4h
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐246Please respect copyright.PENANA1IkmfL98td
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆246Please respect copyright.PENANAZpCNusVvmE
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲246Please respect copyright.PENANAVnVLAqm0x7
帶出角色支線246Please respect copyright.PENANATQtcpwXAGg
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破246Please respect copyright.PENANAO8bQvgR8NF
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫246Please respect copyright.PENANAJgrqKytA6w
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴246Please respect copyright.PENANAhWTvyHqNWe
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌246Please respect copyright.PENANAycVWHFYvjs
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊246Please respect copyright.PENANAc4qYVDxL5v
殺人犯vs富婆246Please respect copyright.PENANAJPeFD76oJm
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌246Please respect copyright.PENANAGfdxK5MRPi
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴246Please respect copyright.PENANAypid21zom8
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕246Please respect copyright.PENANAWoo86un7zj
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。246Please respect copyright.PENANAP1AqODQo8P
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。246Please respect copyright.PENANAtkUGK4M2LJ
魂之詩246Please respect copyright.PENANAKYhUsqPYaK
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