
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』268Please respect copyright.PENANAA6UWtt70Gu
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:268Please respect copyright.PENANAOc5G7itbu9
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐268Please respect copyright.PENANAvVSYjg2gmw
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆268Please respect copyright.PENANA8EcfHMLYSR
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲268Please respect copyright.PENANARYoolA3lno
帶出角色支線268Please respect copyright.PENANAvgP7JNZj7q
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破268Please respect copyright.PENANAIIudb1ja3r
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫268Please respect copyright.PENANAmZMUa7zWsC
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴268Please respect copyright.PENANAghSE63zbfm
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌268Please respect copyright.PENANAjRWv9dSvhX
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊268Please respect copyright.PENANAeo0yjkWZyE
殺人犯vs富婆268Please respect copyright.PENANAo91jvwzZpW
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌268Please respect copyright.PENANAmBMQxi8BO2
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴268Please respect copyright.PENANAkUDENfXR4S
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕268Please respect copyright.PENANABMePkekoPC
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。268Please respect copyright.PENANAaP8tiZYv0t
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。268Please respect copyright.PENANA2QlmkiMAp7
魂之詩268Please respect copyright.PENANAgd2ZLOzynh
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