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我的未來日誌與作品
ENTRY #193
Author: 光卿
Published:
Dec 10, 2021
我的未來日誌與作品
Published:
Dec 10, 2021
ENTRY #193
Day 11 光卿 ─ 《描繪靈魂的方式》
Author: 光卿
Published:
Dec 10, 2021
1 Min Read
242 Words
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以下開始多少有雷，請大家自行斟酌囉。

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要怎麼塑造故事的骨幹、連接頭尾呢？以我閱讀《故事的解剖》的心得來說，大概是：決定人物的慾望、給他阻力、突破難關。

說到人物的慾望，深水的話會有至少兩層：很想要繼續畫下去-＞但是沒辦法繼續畫-＞所以想死

大概是這樣。可是因為想死違背了故事的結尾，且是源自於前一個慾望的不得志所產生的假象，所以必須將之破除，也就是要給予深水想死的這個願望一個阻力。這就是帕多在故事裡的任務。

而等到深水想死的慾望受到動搖，這時候還需要再一個契機來讓他重新拿起畫筆。礬的任務大概就是這個。

那麼首先是帕多。

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《描繪靈魂的方式》

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