昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』146Please respect copyright.PENANA1Unfpcs9KS
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:146Please respect copyright.PENANA78omSkPAxu
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐146Please respect copyright.PENANA1dWVQOJ4vs
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆146Please respect copyright.PENANAQWBNr2SMQz
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲146Please respect copyright.PENANAIgqBXgmKtq
帶出角色支線146Please respect copyright.PENANApdsKOQlAGs
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破146Please respect copyright.PENANACgwVBwvZxN
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫146Please respect copyright.PENANANIcgiuwNty
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴146Please respect copyright.PENANAYtYKgKfGyr
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌146Please respect copyright.PENANAikoK54LTq3
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊146Please respect copyright.PENANAgaSbDnKK6Z
殺人犯vs富婆146Please respect copyright.PENANATDdzzZuJkd
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌146Please respect copyright.PENANAlhy2OmxkqP
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴146Please respect copyright.PENANABhckY3Ji8h
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕146Please respect copyright.PENANAWSfS2mq5kn
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。146Please respect copyright.PENANAg9MWUzT6mi
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。146Please respect copyright.PENANAwGlPN5Co2u
魂之詩146Please respect copyright.PENANAFa3idPZ4XZ
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