
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』329Please respect copyright.PENANAEKl8cnuoo9
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:329Please respect copyright.PENANAiAup4jlYIg
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐329Please respect copyright.PENANALSlyPKe93g
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆329Please respect copyright.PENANA4wA8pHbLKf
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲329Please respect copyright.PENANAGGntnJpEL4
帶出角色支線329Please respect copyright.PENANAGetjRt6J09
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破329Please respect copyright.PENANAnWvadNjcO5
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫329Please respect copyright.PENANA4bOTJo0BqN
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴329Please respect copyright.PENANAhphj2RJHmH
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌329Please respect copyright.PENANABGmlG297PS
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊329Please respect copyright.PENANAXseflt0hnV
殺人犯vs富婆329Please respect copyright.PENANAWmC4Ex1fP6
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌329Please respect copyright.PENANAA6c5SqfDNc
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴329Please respect copyright.PENANAi2Hel6I5Ze
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕329Please respect copyright.PENANAVGuwfMf30k
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。329Please respect copyright.PENANAo7gb1SAYsN
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。329Please respect copyright.PENANA1917Ifmt6y
魂之詩329Please respect copyright.PENANAInc6Op3Nxi
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