我的未來日誌與作品 - Day17-3D八爪魚【魂之詩】

昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜，好睏(死

接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部：『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1zdhIJE27F

四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場，將眾人打散重組成小團體，達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間，這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花，結果是點子很散，沒有流暢的起承轉合，以下是想到的橋段：503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6GhbPStBLb

紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfHBwbG6DK4
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuZ5ZXsorWz

智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwlMGmQG8MK
帶出角色支線503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJMq4a2NHDN

友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHSjbyAmYcj
危險的百合香

櫻安熊發現倉庫503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb6K4pUfACa
主線

初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFhsr5OSpEx
證明大小姐真意

祐嘉質問昌503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwivZSeqcOw
祐嘉對紅楓的信任

紅楓與大小姐閒聊503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdln8EkW5ze
殺人犯vs富婆503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLJyyjuV8Uf

一輪深思後，將以上點子整合成四個章節：

1 祐嘉質問昌503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2rWWhO8akW
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoRWp4gNAfP
3 智賀玩遊戲，友梨亞里割腕503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRiNnFO9LTY
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫，初秋打哈哈

基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹，實際内容是邊寫邊想的。503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNUZMAhVfNe
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcOgtYJwbG3

魂之詩503Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0tJKzxaDVO

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