
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』307Please respect copyright.PENANAVAVCwriUpN
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:307Please respect copyright.PENANAclSOTjHfUw
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐307Please respect copyright.PENANAHbRJJ8NED2
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆307Please respect copyright.PENANAcs9xfJUu3q
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲307Please respect copyright.PENANAV7CaXXPAeg
帶出角色支線307Please respect copyright.PENANACUT053rLOf
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破307Please respect copyright.PENANAa1uYdzT4rb
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫307Please respect copyright.PENANA4vpuHzMH6F
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴307Please respect copyright.PENANAKlVtzDTVjv
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌307Please respect copyright.PENANAM8HZwAvRuo
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊307Please respect copyright.PENANAhpuIu0nehl
殺人犯vs富婆307Please respect copyright.PENANA9pdvpgphel
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌307Please respect copyright.PENANA7j4UKCDpaW
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴307Please respect copyright.PENANAKXM7OJqNX9
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕307Please respect copyright.PENANAtMXIibN4uG
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。307Please respect copyright.PENANAMUcMFOlpyK
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。307Please respect copyright.PENANAgoYFB0WOMO
魂之詩307Please respect copyright.PENANAfEvIVMdAMs
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