
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』357Please respect copyright.PENANAMzJRVsgaLk
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:357Please respect copyright.PENANA0ELyskCZnk
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐357Please respect copyright.PENANAsSbbZ1VsXH
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆357Please respect copyright.PENANAbXo0QH4Pcf
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲357Please respect copyright.PENANAKQi2T08Ynd
帶出角色支線357Please respect copyright.PENANAlzMLCTfq85
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破357Please respect copyright.PENANAajogCjPRiJ
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫357Please respect copyright.PENANApYKenigChQ
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴357Please respect copyright.PENANABd1xBDKSn8
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌357Please respect copyright.PENANAjR6Hg2i899
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊357Please respect copyright.PENANAdWFCIN2gbe
殺人犯vs富婆357Please respect copyright.PENANAyULGpQM7Y5
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌357Please respect copyright.PENANAdFR3sGu3EO
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴357Please respect copyright.PENANAtDPITRxdAg
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕357Please respect copyright.PENANAtY0vrmY66C
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。357Please respect copyright.PENANAsuokUfW4Ss
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。357Please respect copyright.PENANAWeNIKR10iM
魂之詩357Please respect copyright.PENANAE6Yq9tWhAC
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