
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』240Please respect copyright.PENANALZFIy8Li5H
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:240Please respect copyright.PENANA4fDuxLo4bW
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐240Please respect copyright.PENANAYOW1NuWQHH
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆240Please respect copyright.PENANADq5Wwngk3L
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲240Please respect copyright.PENANAnqgrU7DuKd
帶出角色支線240Please respect copyright.PENANAKuzwFltFYx
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破240Please respect copyright.PENANAt6vDrcsGni
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫240Please respect copyright.PENANA8kaVovBonC
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴240Please respect copyright.PENANA7gs4otDuS9
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌240Please respect copyright.PENANAV6D2BG8Qym
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊240Please respect copyright.PENANAP9rrPVoEJG
殺人犯vs富婆240Please respect copyright.PENANAWWRK86ncbo
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌240Please respect copyright.PENANA3zcEGnCNxI
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴240Please respect copyright.PENANAwoccmgA57J
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕240Please respect copyright.PENANAcFEimVIVWk
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。240Please respect copyright.PENANAhXgJ9M9eUI
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。240Please respect copyright.PENANAWLoXLLqdfq
魂之詩240Please respect copyright.PENANANe9o2O0Jbj
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