
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』323Please respect copyright.PENANA8u1CVydyxO
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:323Please respect copyright.PENANAcxX07MuRV0
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐323Please respect copyright.PENANAeytGhwBi0u
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆323Please respect copyright.PENANA8aotvm278u
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲323Please respect copyright.PENANALdZvR2ySu6
帶出角色支線323Please respect copyright.PENANAtbByTqemom
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破323Please respect copyright.PENANA77UCU8j7cr
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫323Please respect copyright.PENANARBBIkOxhcj
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴323Please respect copyright.PENANAa22IXcy8v5
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌323Please respect copyright.PENANAov2ARkyYdf
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊323Please respect copyright.PENANAnmU0tKh5vG
殺人犯vs富婆323Please respect copyright.PENANAp1CRRiBSsh
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌323Please respect copyright.PENANACFZXCoyjnU
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴323Please respect copyright.PENANAei9voy1PQR
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕323Please respect copyright.PENANAcXIgYAA3DJ
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。323Please respect copyright.PENANALlGGLIG10C
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。323Please respect copyright.PENANATmV5q1vsiz
魂之詩323Please respect copyright.PENANAtTglkzcvsN
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