
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』263Please respect copyright.PENANAPdXGL3gKUW
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:263Please respect copyright.PENANA6ZIsq6jMFN
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐263Please respect copyright.PENANADEMcvrj9co
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆263Please respect copyright.PENANAslrhdvGhk5
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲263Please respect copyright.PENANApVZbwtdfxa
帶出角色支線263Please respect copyright.PENANAHcoz1us3oz
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破263Please respect copyright.PENANAfIPli43nwS
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫263Please respect copyright.PENANACo7QsjteeZ
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴263Please respect copyright.PENANAMEYkFbogN5
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌263Please respect copyright.PENANAWq8aM1ZbET
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊263Please respect copyright.PENANAqrg00KJ4qF
殺人犯vs富婆263Please respect copyright.PENANAEmvx1Zybuk
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌263Please respect copyright.PENANAyQAf47dU0x
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴263Please respect copyright.PENANA57OjwdGSfX
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕263Please respect copyright.PENANAi1oKreQeAt
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。263Please respect copyright.PENANAL6WMU7DovA
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。263Please respect copyright.PENANAwts5720YCp
魂之詩263Please respect copyright.PENANANSZoJAxOqK
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