100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmRwVH5XXlo
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以怪物為主題：84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8QJQ4EBeqZ
創挑還沒有結果啊！84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUYnwyn9l8x
有了嗎？84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbwd9yLisD5
還沒啊……84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxa9AsxBO84
怎麼還沒呢？84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa0sPSMKgfs
怎麼呢……84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8awHDzGe2N
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡorPPyFoD0H
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEFJuOkSoSS
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSty9YoDPl0
今天會把報告交上來吧？84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlqjvKfppOF
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbpTNIhxF0g
啊！有怪獸！84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSneR64ClNU
哪裡？那裡？84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy7LNwOPba4
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj22ghUkMht
就在你你我的時間裡！84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd1iQveXo1L
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjFbVuCYiYW
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～84Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZrQwORsSOv
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