100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhLgwV0cwfV
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以怪物為主題：392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbcMmD0DJSK
創挑還沒有結果啊！392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4cRBCdUCzt
有了嗎？392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA6gIrtf32i
還沒啊……392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeHWVAIbILH
怎麼還沒呢？392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLkldEHZFZd
怎麼呢……392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxYA7NYeUDi
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQZhBP9z9wh
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDF5Z41axKs
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHeKOc673sC
今天會把報告交上來吧？392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHhQ8UZLkD4
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKwDml82kP1
啊！有怪獸！392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5anFDhXY06
哪裡？那裡？392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS9qVr5bsw0
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlN45rxxhur
就在你你我的時間裡！392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSngjzucujO
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2h5rBBt5lE
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～392Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyMwQIIawHv
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