100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGkmeE84uzz
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以怪物為主題：78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwSheORf48L
創挑還沒有結果啊！78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCv2T0T3dM8
有了嗎？78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCbKEbBbHwj
還沒啊……78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTuzJ82dWha
怎麼還沒呢？78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWnEvMHrNAo
怎麼呢……78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsfrWUrCrBe
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxldyACNHj6
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyGPygqRYpj
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqHDQjWA3g3
今天會把報告交上來吧？78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDIqU4aumnl
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3bEcZpprfD
啊！有怪獸！78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ61r96Xf5yg
哪裡？那裡？78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Mg7XTdNF1
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXfPeKS1Xqg
就在你你我的時間裡！78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzD8ol7LQ2N
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhvMKKT3YMV
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～78Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9X84pVQeje
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