100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ55Vntdy4VI
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以怪物為主題：26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgkzfZz7blW
創挑還沒有結果啊！26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqiEAlTCYgq
有了嗎？26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdi6c74HoQC
還沒啊……26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmD8KScRV7s
怎麼還沒呢？26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYmbb2amedz
怎麼呢……26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFArOGqzYSS
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnZ5SDRMwzX
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡagCzi20HpJ
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjTos9iXawa
今天會把報告交上來吧？26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlA2eQuGNKy
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy4Dj8ziFOb
啊！有怪獸！26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZot2LgHPgG
哪裡？那裡？26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVOKVJBkEv7
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPpJ9PLCbVZ
就在你你我的時間裡！26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEiW95BpBmO
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRTzi2OVEvo
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～26Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlgfDtDGhIW
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