100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbqAegkQygu
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以怪物為主題：103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaMcIp0bCiu
創挑還沒有結果啊！103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZmhvaRAwWF
有了嗎？103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU5iMtL7KFY
還沒啊……103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdVsZqLpSxc
怎麼還沒呢？103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5RBEflF93N
怎麼呢……103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7EWIOBNH1D
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu8JqAaBrt9
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIAFot8DZor
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNn4G7iCelD
今天會把報告交上來吧？103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwJfrFM3c47
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡALGURI7hCK
啊！有怪獸！103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7aJCtRybxn
哪裡？那裡？103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnsH1hupIwJ
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNLpP4i9hfS
就在你你我的時間裡！103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuIHdAVo3Vv
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡywlEuNKQhp
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～103Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQAdHYinNPl
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