100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoijowT3N4d
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以怪物為主題：393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMR7SfXUe3a
創挑還沒有結果啊！393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK2b4pI6s86
有了嗎？393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgcJwlPCHa5
還沒啊……393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ00VkO5uwuK
怎麼還沒呢？393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjvteFAKBSh
怎麼呢……393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcJQZ17falA
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy5KtiISz4q
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr9O8V2mzTD
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlXonfgwXO9
今天會把報告交上來吧？393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1aT4vehwHy
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNqL8BmqMis
啊！有怪獸！393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡem9M1OBQOh
哪裡？那裡？393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzY2YyvLqq2
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Lc4fR8U78
就在你你我的時間裡！393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0adlqXRJCr
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHNuTOLgnKv
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxN44b4B03q
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