「光在哪裡? 」我從來不期望看到。271Please respect copyright.PENANAsPqa96oS1Y
「看!在流星的上面!」一把手拉過另一把手。271Please respect copyright.PENANAoEAwZy6hma
「在哪裡?」可我想看到,因為……271Please respect copyright.PENANAap83bgzict
「看!在流行的下面!」兩手交握,似乎就要衝上天際。271Please respect copyright.PENANAHlwPtP2unJ
「在哪?」這個……我唯有緊緊握着手心裡的手。271Please respect copyright.PENANAYLtTXXzGJe
「哎喲!就在你這裡!」女孩輕輕一點男孩的心……271Please respect copyright.PENANA016vplULUB
原來光是那麼溫暖……271Please respect copyright.PENANAP3MDKizjAR
還……
有點……271Please respect copyright.PENANANPxZfgnJi2
肉肉?
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100 篇微型小說讀者回饋活動:會發光的樹 —— 夏季雨271Please respect copyright.PENANACnZUm85w4b
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彤畫留話:271Please respect copyright.PENANAj13HYLyPof
季雨這一篇很有童話的感覺,就是《小王子》的概念。雖然這個「大人看不到小孩看到的」的意義在《小王子》這本書發行後就很普遍,不過我覺得超微型小說因為體制短小,要給人留有印象需要有意思或意義。所以我覺得季雨成功把意義放進了微小裡,提升了微小的內在含義,很不錯哦。描述得也有畫面感,感覺就是卡通童話的氛圍。一起加油!271Please respect copyright.PENANAV4d4ERaLjz
非常感謝夏季雨的參與!
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