感謝各位的投稿!372Please respect copyright.PENANAnHZbxfGhrV
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!372Please respect copyright.PENANAeoZeVYYwRR
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~372Please respect copyright.PENANAoJoQtiZeMT
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法372Please respect copyright.PENANAW4dTJMcWTH
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!372Please respect copyright.PENANAEdIGke9uVB
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!372Please respect copyright.PENANAOpINAnVNeQ
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》372Please respect copyright.PENANA4S36MXEnom
(兼人氣獎得主)372Please respect copyright.PENANAdiq5bzg75Z
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD372Please respect copyright.PENANA8UCau2BMfj
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W372Please respect copyright.PENANAOXWBCthGGy
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!372Please respect copyright.PENANAgxlNHBxdOi
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」372Please respect copyright.PENANAc9Xz6RKvu4
結果後續結尾意外二連發!372Please respect copyright.PENANAM100upttIL
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意372Please respect copyright.PENANAIpHonwTXP2
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺372Please respect copyright.PENANA1IV46iOHy9
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事372Please respect copyright.PENANA4GRVCo9n8B
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》372Please respect copyright.PENANAuf4DhEqylk
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD372Please respect copyright.PENANAV9iN0iiunK
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯372Please respect copyright.PENANAKSXQCcWv50
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣372Please respect copyright.PENANAV5C9QW3WJm
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD372Please respect copyright.PENANAwY1D94e3ZD
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~372Please respect copyright.PENANAYUty05sXFa
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?372Please respect copyright.PENANAYCtvGwFWVw
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文372Please respect copyright.PENANAcOOseDJO6Q
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:372Please respect copyright.PENANAkh4tz8Ppq7
這個名次是最難抉擇的372Please respect copyright.PENANAAoTct3g04u
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態372Please respect copyright.PENANA9ngslT6s4b
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧372Please respect copyright.PENANAQjwPZBMejQ
以發佈順序點評:372Please respect copyright.PENANAlMHw3VrATR
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》372Please respect copyright.PENANAjix8UkC09h
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底372Please respect copyright.PENANAMHFjDnefgN
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END372Please respect copyright.PENANARZCT7QJkVD
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺372Please respect copyright.PENANA0qJP9gR2MZ
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案372Please respect copyright.PENANA4UraxhPe2N
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w372Please respect copyright.PENANACxW02QQ6dJ
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖372Please respect copyright.PENANAPW5PBCVuIz
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到372Please respect copyright.PENANAwCY6dQVbIy
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》372Please respect copyright.PENANAiUyWg3JoDS
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!372Please respect copyright.PENANAI61PZucqxi
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點372Please respect copyright.PENANAcnRf0nSSNE
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD372Please respect copyright.PENANA3XDNeNIoji
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)372Please respect copyright.PENANA5oSqj9EOyt
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒372Please respect copyright.PENANA8lAb0NTJOR
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚372Please respect copyright.PENANAOnfSJUPZKa
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失372Please respect copyright.PENANALCULbWqAq3
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了372Please respect copyright.PENANAAAovDTr6zE
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性372Please respect copyright.PENANALlhv9sVZkC
例如:372Please respect copyright.PENANAGLc5jLNfdS
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢372Please respect copyright.PENANAUICfDcrYCK
>放學忘記去放乖乖372Please respect copyright.PENANATWJicV6S4p
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂372Please respect copyright.PENANAuEovNHq6MT
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些372Please respect copyright.PENANAuXzs532rhM
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性372Please respect copyright.PENANAXHpMrJ4eMI
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》372Please respect copyright.PENANAhT7JJ5XS1j
宛如聊齋的古風故事372Please respect copyright.PENANA4A8U32W6xh
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?372Please respect copyright.PENANArwlfqihtFq
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋372Please respect copyright.PENANAEmSyd5WZdd
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)372Please respect copyright.PENANAMS3bRPFxI6
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?372Please respect copyright.PENANAsdof8ryHDH
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度372Please respect copyright.PENANAL5lU8LMK5S
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD372Please respect copyright.PENANAvifLaroynj
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌372Please respect copyright.PENANAF9JjkIRNTs
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了372Please respect copyright.PENANA4eDkJXXCkE
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞372Please respect copyright.PENANAi5xYfbskhM
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間372Please respect copyright.PENANAQ1aeERqhFf
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠372Please respect copyright.PENANAMjKxcVipON
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖372Please respect copyright.PENANAWfKGXKzZv4
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒372Please respect copyright.PENANAeqOTrWf58X
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說372Please respect copyright.PENANA7SHR5NoEug
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》372Please respect copyright.PENANAhT1Weby9WC
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞372Please respect copyright.PENANA6eH02iFDhV
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!