感謝各位的投稿！336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU9o2e8AisB
看了八篇不同風格的故事！真讓人開心！336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlAQHzWOjvl
先恭喜得獎的故事，夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA6gKzaDT55
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUHkpVnFGID
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優，純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得！336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAqHmCHvqtv
就那麼剛好的，第一名也同為人氣獎得主！336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9pU55BZqlP
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名：《Cứu, cứu cháu với》336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCtM0g8jOYW
（兼人氣獎得主）336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGdOo2efSXq
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp5nbFyznh0
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqYedTf6vV3
除了開頭很逗之外，還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面！336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvdsDNapg8G
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺，只認為「唉唷！有點看頭！」336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7YbvNGDY1w
結果後續結尾意外二連發！336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡghGKoOii0C
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ48Thap72cr
這在整天看完之後，都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNuTXXUBUNY
用字簡單明白，劇情樸實無華，卻令人覺得真有其事336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKcnK2QKVhW
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名：《廊道》336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMmjOx4VzBw
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSqsJejt4Wn
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQexVLBnlcS
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXkmNQCY82M
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的，特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwWHLs1Dbhy
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ＯＤＯ唉呀～336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVLYxaB0rqa
就是沒有被驚艷到，但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體（？336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyPVLNTs8lt
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqCAhnmyvk0
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名：336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFoDZl8oYuq
這個名次是最難抉擇的336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYLwCaMucrE
因為我第三喜歡的文章，都是「好可惜」的狀態336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVaVqzWGTT5
既然是曾經競爭的三篇，就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgVgr69GaIu
以發佈順序點評：336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡStk2uWeXde
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡinGRolAEgs
超值爽直快，一筆暢通到底336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoWZ1hiZn4I
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQhI3Sgx1ze
沒有任何曲折離奇，鬼說來就來，說殺就殺336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV1xAclQ2mj
WOW！明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv9fAgFxc9w
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpw66BPFzIO
但好可惜的部分，就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4lJRBOO6Z2
跟第二名同樣，劇情上沒有被驚艷到336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx7O9hH1p0A
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKagXssJ76f
好可惜！這篇真的要大喊好可惜！336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb5l5PDFwWw
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1xVaGFExBF
對呀，我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnK0Bxhtyn5
（老實說我原本不知道有這個文化，後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識）336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡavacQulA82
唉呀，故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4KqHHFGjhS
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOLaL4FsChV
結尾真的很可惜，因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ03efLyTBzl
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢，其他都只是想太多了336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwOpJdBjhFT
結尾建議多一點點暗示，增加故事的慣連性336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6I4At4hVqe
例如：336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrd5u9pfp4S
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣，原來是在做夢336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡurCTz8JWEM
>放學忘記去放乖乖336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeCBlRt3IYN
>回家打開冷氣時，乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著（喂336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDKfoj3g5oT
好啦、浮誇了，就只是希望結尾完整一些336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvOwZX0BZEQ
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhSkBf1qrmb
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止，實為可惜
《玉妃引》336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzUDVu8i5BI
宛如聊齋的古風故事336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcazvMeyarB
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情（？336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkra5G7GoIA
不恐怖但很有趣，就像我前面說的宛如聊齋336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDURgGulF4P
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定（好微妙）336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfvCzb0WhIQ
雖然排版壅擠，但內容可以說是很漂亮？336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH5aYHxGXOn
對，有氣氛、有畫面，就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWSqXD1UJsO
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL9wQyDtZUg
以中段度來說乖乖贏了，但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnfMAD7xa6Z
畢竟乖乖文化，會讓我產生期待，然而他卻讓我跌倒了336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0gdaJJ1CNN
玉妃引穩紮穩打，也許沒有錯愕驚奇，但他有離奇軼聞336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvIaeLmadkN
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJvyZMnU8Ga
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格，彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎（對，都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfB8fWKEDaI
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsCCsHc4bOj
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待，一秒過後讓我跌倒336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5gBzNYV4N1
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊（初次閱讀衝擊性來說336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf5syPRe7dQ
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9z8logPhgZ
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞336Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ66CXA2PAUQ
再次感謝各位的參與！下次有機會開創挑的話！歡迎再來玩！
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