感謝各位的投稿!215Please respect copyright.PENANAyjZY5AadLg
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!215Please respect copyright.PENANAb54ieoLLtv
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~215Please respect copyright.PENANA14tcpE7qsL
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法215Please respect copyright.PENANA78DsRl9N4M
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!215Please respect copyright.PENANAEAZJctMebY
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!215Please respect copyright.PENANAuT9sjB1hrN
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》215Please respect copyright.PENANAXznY3FCyUl
(兼人氣獎得主)215Please respect copyright.PENANAxLUsCvHb7N
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD215Please respect copyright.PENANAsJ1ozPa9dW
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W215Please respect copyright.PENANANrLvGu4mR8
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!215Please respect copyright.PENANALyrVadNaOP
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」215Please respect copyright.PENANACJCvBCUKd7
結果後續結尾意外二連發!215Please respect copyright.PENANA5uO1RiBCD6
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意215Please respect copyright.PENANAz11UtbHPco
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺215Please respect copyright.PENANAFL92WkGN7c
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事215Please respect copyright.PENANA5OmeLb5HG1
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》215Please respect copyright.PENANAoRPJat4Ca6
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD215Please respect copyright.PENANAJy5Bd5cm1Z
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯215Please respect copyright.PENANAaS6Kku1FsK
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣215Please respect copyright.PENANAy4QCof5c02
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD215Please respect copyright.PENANAazW7mscmSW
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~215Please respect copyright.PENANABpQriAsWfo
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?215Please respect copyright.PENANAXAnuQA2cRz
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文215Please respect copyright.PENANAYoK95T8DGb
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:215Please respect copyright.PENANAQv5U9PPAVz
這個名次是最難抉擇的215Please respect copyright.PENANAw1gSZnkhEX
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態215Please respect copyright.PENANAid0uHqgRBh
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧215Please respect copyright.PENANA8c9Xl8vcGO
以發佈順序點評:215Please respect copyright.PENANAJneqZibDOJ
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》215Please respect copyright.PENANAyvwDS3lqR6
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底215Please respect copyright.PENANALIspywS2yR
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END215Please respect copyright.PENANA421sdeIw06
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺215Please respect copyright.PENANAlVj8O5oEB3
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案215Please respect copyright.PENANAIh4LQ2v4oO
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w215Please respect copyright.PENANAcMcdHu5pab
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖215Please respect copyright.PENANABGVTxUlgQU
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到215Please respect copyright.PENANAL57Ln3J1Bs
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》215Please respect copyright.PENANALKphBLWhcC
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!215Please respect copyright.PENANAR6oNR8Hpmn
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點215Please respect copyright.PENANAIc0hzXaMvM
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD215Please respect copyright.PENANAghdAFJCIkN
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)215Please respect copyright.PENANAgY7Ic8INcU
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒215Please respect copyright.PENANAFhmRFs6jDg
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚215Please respect copyright.PENANAprqCwO3Z8S
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失215Please respect copyright.PENANAFGrbRXp4o3
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了215Please respect copyright.PENANAMPpshol0su
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性215Please respect copyright.PENANABYAbOYJV1d
例如:215Please respect copyright.PENANALoxPhl0IoT
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢215Please respect copyright.PENANAzU29n50JQt
>放學忘記去放乖乖215Please respect copyright.PENANAw1uG7Ck1O3
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂215Please respect copyright.PENANATZP1qeBInM
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些215Please respect copyright.PENANAdUR6iNTmDN
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性215Please respect copyright.PENANAknli4XkSOi
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》215Please respect copyright.PENANAeOoqYTxmmn
宛如聊齋的古風故事215Please respect copyright.PENANAX0lNsq30Q1
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?215Please respect copyright.PENANAx00DpgfJbS
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋215Please respect copyright.PENANA8cTs2lhEMo
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)215Please respect copyright.PENANAdDuR8ePF9A
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?215Please respect copyright.PENANApODugg6HsJ
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度215Please respect copyright.PENANAU8DKqgK0fW
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD215Please respect copyright.PENANAVmGeHVJU56
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌215Please respect copyright.PENANAmRZJQ009uy
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了215Please respect copyright.PENANAKwNDAIBIkO
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞215Please respect copyright.PENANAHTOqOaMosj
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間215Please respect copyright.PENANAIYTOex4Rpp
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠215Please respect copyright.PENANAgMWASkUKc5
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖215Please respect copyright.PENANAr8NJR6xikv
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒215Please respect copyright.PENANAko9k5Oi43L
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說215Please respect copyright.PENANAdyOmrPA2zu
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》215Please respect copyright.PENANAHWPmBg1EqS
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞215Please respect copyright.PENANANSHVv2KKvW
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!