感謝各位的投稿!424Please respect copyright.PENANAHf9PWdz9kF
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!424Please respect copyright.PENANAb9Ife2vaS9
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~424Please respect copyright.PENANAizwFh6QhkB
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法424Please respect copyright.PENANAfwvU6JFfru
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!424Please respect copyright.PENANAZnC6LWjono
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!424Please respect copyright.PENANAX7wilEsB0W
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》424Please respect copyright.PENANAneIdiRENxR
(兼人氣獎得主)424Please respect copyright.PENANACuqws3v6LF
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD424Please respect copyright.PENANAbu0C9fMqji
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W424Please respect copyright.PENANABPwSDOYkTa
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!424Please respect copyright.PENANAeklfylDiPr
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」424Please respect copyright.PENANAvBWrwek95g
結果後續結尾意外二連發!424Please respect copyright.PENANAOHVRLNVA4T
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意424Please respect copyright.PENANADNHabEBUdr
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺424Please respect copyright.PENANAjA4VYw35z1
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事424Please respect copyright.PENANA0ULACAstjr
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》424Please respect copyright.PENANAupciCsSFhW
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD424Please respect copyright.PENANAOgwAxVKmFQ
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯424Please respect copyright.PENANAtDvEjze49y
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣424Please respect copyright.PENANAprz8wHj1Z9
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD424Please respect copyright.PENANADmoGAZDwRJ
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~424Please respect copyright.PENANAqpgsaAvCl4
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?424Please respect copyright.PENANAc0M88X3m63
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文424Please respect copyright.PENANANi7W6wdENd
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:424Please respect copyright.PENANAHW25HX1uCR
這個名次是最難抉擇的424Please respect copyright.PENANASHfNnTiV8q
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態424Please respect copyright.PENANAieqXqJjhUx
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧424Please respect copyright.PENANAPVp8hPjPIP
以發佈順序點評:424Please respect copyright.PENANAqN902OXozK
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》424Please respect copyright.PENANAZzzhwqZKaB
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底424Please respect copyright.PENANAEhkjTsg8uw
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END424Please respect copyright.PENANAnE7AAdsipT
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺424Please respect copyright.PENANAXkgls9kzim
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案424Please respect copyright.PENANAZwSJRT6zTB
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w424Please respect copyright.PENANATPGJFIDtAL
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖424Please respect copyright.PENANARBO7DtwnDx
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到424Please respect copyright.PENANAQ1U0VP2UyU
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》424Please respect copyright.PENANAWpSotUaYQQ
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!424Please respect copyright.PENANAf8z9aJ9StG
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點424Please respect copyright.PENANAgiYMJfpRd9
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD424Please respect copyright.PENANAxu84yRZ2pV
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)424Please respect copyright.PENANAmzdECsnzAn
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒424Please respect copyright.PENANAKAjWdtKgX3
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚424Please respect copyright.PENANAkYMgID4Zhc
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失424Please respect copyright.PENANAJnLSPvQn66
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了424Please respect copyright.PENANAffrtoAkRfa
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性424Please respect copyright.PENANAfVNldNf5SA
例如:424Please respect copyright.PENANABSuUYo3I1g
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢424Please respect copyright.PENANAwJchi10bpl
>放學忘記去放乖乖424Please respect copyright.PENANAwenilbpQTT
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂424Please respect copyright.PENANAngvEmsz6Me
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些424Please respect copyright.PENANAPDOsD4P6gR
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性424Please respect copyright.PENANA570JHo31HL
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》424Please respect copyright.PENANAbcRIBd4qIK
宛如聊齋的古風故事424Please respect copyright.PENANAW7TEl6eDGA
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?424Please respect copyright.PENANAF3bYf8G5kB
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋424Please respect copyright.PENANA5fwmmOppZj
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)424Please respect copyright.PENANAHwJAPsh0Qo
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?424Please respect copyright.PENANAGboYhmCVkJ
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度424Please respect copyright.PENANAmPY43ZPgBH
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD424Please respect copyright.PENANAFuwKt2Pk3S
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌424Please respect copyright.PENANAk34nCaGNdO
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了424Please respect copyright.PENANAaF7KgXzeEo
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞424Please respect copyright.PENANAlHmhbAGo1q
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間424Please respect copyright.PENANALb3P4oRd9f
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠424Please respect copyright.PENANAARIjuv7ky7
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖424Please respect copyright.PENANAMCmZgn7uwz
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒424Please respect copyright.PENANAXkSwyaFQ3G
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說424Please respect copyright.PENANAVWzbaNn2Gk
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》424Please respect copyright.PENANAJowkkn9Jgz
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞424Please respect copyright.PENANAW0TlwXraao
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!