感謝各位的投稿!222Please respect copyright.PENANAPw1SA3E8U0
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!222Please respect copyright.PENANACcdRpG9OVV
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~222Please respect copyright.PENANAnvLtH0qJtF
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法222Please respect copyright.PENANAxnttzu2cSR
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!222Please respect copyright.PENANAHeZJTa84S0
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!222Please respect copyright.PENANAIMe0WDrb3l
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》222Please respect copyright.PENANA1Bbf48kdf3
(兼人氣獎得主)222Please respect copyright.PENANAruIiRPluEb
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD222Please respect copyright.PENANAYPkBhapR0Y
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W222Please respect copyright.PENANAqZVIN6hKKM
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!222Please respect copyright.PENANAgvXdUPVhiU
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」222Please respect copyright.PENANA2RYjXnaU3E
結果後續結尾意外二連發!222Please respect copyright.PENANApTNqH6dyM9
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意222Please respect copyright.PENANAro9dr5Uj3c
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺222Please respect copyright.PENANAS6UjHLFcvs
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事222Please respect copyright.PENANAyFi9tIZ93x
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》222Please respect copyright.PENANAHiWaveEQ4X
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD222Please respect copyright.PENANAerN1WtyUQx
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯222Please respect copyright.PENANArNKa8Z9X5s
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣222Please respect copyright.PENANAfF5pQv5Q80
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD222Please respect copyright.PENANAHkBuOrFobO
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~222Please respect copyright.PENANA8inpfrR4Ba
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?222Please respect copyright.PENANAprt8bNKfr8
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文222Please respect copyright.PENANAhIf58sMvKw
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:222Please respect copyright.PENANAlEpRwNHHpo
這個名次是最難抉擇的222Please respect copyright.PENANAbd8AK4zLiC
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態222Please respect copyright.PENANATw8inkvAZU
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧222Please respect copyright.PENANADsQp1wQZCk
以發佈順序點評:222Please respect copyright.PENANAe7JBSusd2s
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》222Please respect copyright.PENANAFuf40gDq8Y
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底222Please respect copyright.PENANArIfpG1DzF3
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END222Please respect copyright.PENANAfyJOwc6hlS
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺222Please respect copyright.PENANAnDoi6IGBST
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案222Please respect copyright.PENANAlFVKKti77I
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w222Please respect copyright.PENANArkoXhUB7VJ
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖222Please respect copyright.PENANAvCW9z6ZmnH
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到222Please respect copyright.PENANA5cLSb1fPhF
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》222Please respect copyright.PENANAuUMKHOYQGD
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!222Please respect copyright.PENANAJjikamJiVN
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點222Please respect copyright.PENANAmst6fUKF9B
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD222Please respect copyright.PENANAIcwFztbXMr
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)222Please respect copyright.PENANAHgtG4kGALg
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒222Please respect copyright.PENANAuwLEW5VY3N
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚222Please respect copyright.PENANAVYwlS8BkG8
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失222Please respect copyright.PENANAL6QuF0esmY
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了222Please respect copyright.PENANA994RHBqYAj
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性222Please respect copyright.PENANAPaXZ85wcb7
例如:222Please respect copyright.PENANAncnXoISGcZ
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢222Please respect copyright.PENANAIX97pZOwzu
>放學忘記去放乖乖222Please respect copyright.PENANAYfhb0X5QoG
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂222Please respect copyright.PENANAlv5ggN44aQ
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些222Please respect copyright.PENANAUkRA2fBS22
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性222Please respect copyright.PENANATWcim4ocuu
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》222Please respect copyright.PENANAEI29K8C3dU
宛如聊齋的古風故事222Please respect copyright.PENANAyMRx4dU3Yb
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?222Please respect copyright.PENANAjf0rFKlv8r
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋222Please respect copyright.PENANAMG5WILdcVW
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)222Please respect copyright.PENANAk95dkOw9np
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?222Please respect copyright.PENANAUtYELoalab
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度222Please respect copyright.PENANAaV1CGI6VsN
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD222Please respect copyright.PENANA7Al5krOxbU
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌222Please respect copyright.PENANAoyklbRnyVj
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了222Please respect copyright.PENANArTOSGaC0JK
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞222Please respect copyright.PENANAu1TrJGmNda
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間222Please respect copyright.PENANAgPOMJxu5dn
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠222Please respect copyright.PENANASBIhSnOx02
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖222Please respect copyright.PENANARSoIuo3YRC
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒222Please respect copyright.PENANAUoSrew38nG
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說222Please respect copyright.PENANAh8CF33NS6O
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》222Please respect copyright.PENANAFr2VJuza62
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞222Please respect copyright.PENANAnrh9QznPK4
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!