感謝各位的投稿!452Please respect copyright.PENANAzTTxJjdgqP
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!452Please respect copyright.PENANATG08oNn4Fz
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~452Please respect copyright.PENANAB9CWsdHtu5
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法452Please respect copyright.PENANAsB7AdHCCde
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!452Please respect copyright.PENANADhG3Rjghp6
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!452Please respect copyright.PENANArm1HiDUHHS
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》452Please respect copyright.PENANAuEwiCn97bW
(兼人氣獎得主)452Please respect copyright.PENANAv0C7uIFMab
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD452Please respect copyright.PENANAwC0ScQiUXa
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W452Please respect copyright.PENANAonZc6S8PFp
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!452Please respect copyright.PENANAs4moAu674y
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」452Please respect copyright.PENANAjbJa5c8ksS
結果後續結尾意外二連發!452Please respect copyright.PENANAdn6nVRgq1b
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意452Please respect copyright.PENANAfDb6juqw3t
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺452Please respect copyright.PENANAPVwyvhMy0A
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事452Please respect copyright.PENANAclGs7vPsqP
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》452Please respect copyright.PENANA4E4KoB82A8
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD452Please respect copyright.PENANAHdOFJnMTDP
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯452Please respect copyright.PENANAjg1k5VE7jp
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣452Please respect copyright.PENANACPU4qZfYt8
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD452Please respect copyright.PENANAadgE8uV0Hj
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~452Please respect copyright.PENANAes3kyk6XOk
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?452Please respect copyright.PENANANoObc3s9vI
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文452Please respect copyright.PENANA90RnMs8UT9
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:452Please respect copyright.PENANA2WoD9zdDrh
這個名次是最難抉擇的452Please respect copyright.PENANARcOqicIscg
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態452Please respect copyright.PENANAvYdBfiNm69
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧452Please respect copyright.PENANAwiFtp1Z8X7
以發佈順序點評:452Please respect copyright.PENANAwnA4W6eJRY
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》452Please respect copyright.PENANAvvhqovlSUi
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底452Please respect copyright.PENANAeXoO9ebhvu
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END452Please respect copyright.PENANAaFUAEYiXF9
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺452Please respect copyright.PENANA1ulgXwGNWu
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案452Please respect copyright.PENANA4xDCInczeL
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w452Please respect copyright.PENANASM1upw8E0n
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖452Please respect copyright.PENANAFb6KEchRz1
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到452Please respect copyright.PENANAyihtnGdkjz
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》452Please respect copyright.PENANA3NTVd1atI2
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!452Please respect copyright.PENANAilvOy2E2lg
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點452Please respect copyright.PENANApcKD5nneWz
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD452Please respect copyright.PENANA42sGBxy9IZ
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)452Please respect copyright.PENANAFjXWg7XOLM
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒452Please respect copyright.PENANARov96CtXCN
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚452Please respect copyright.PENANA5Uc4kFlfmE
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失452Please respect copyright.PENANAxoZAndkOax
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了452Please respect copyright.PENANA4umnaHn3Ru
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性452Please respect copyright.PENANApGEhTzOZn6
例如:452Please respect copyright.PENANATmi5wiNYzm
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢452Please respect copyright.PENANAbXZqhg7DU1
>放學忘記去放乖乖452Please respect copyright.PENANAbs2z8Niuio
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂452Please respect copyright.PENANA5risvEp7RI
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些452Please respect copyright.PENANAhFa4hEdRDI
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性452Please respect copyright.PENANACqbtKiRMIR
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》452Please respect copyright.PENANAk1iuZBOdps
宛如聊齋的古風故事452Please respect copyright.PENANApF3VhkZekj
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?452Please respect copyright.PENANAieVlbquSX4
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋452Please respect copyright.PENANA2hz20sLwBG
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)452Please respect copyright.PENANA0iA1OFsqjc
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?452Please respect copyright.PENANA6j3sAP1Nrn
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度452Please respect copyright.PENANA6ITcLfNJHZ
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD452Please respect copyright.PENANAVVjpg1YYkj
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌452Please respect copyright.PENANAYo3BEcn8P0
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了452Please respect copyright.PENANAoiyfuzjVRE
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞452Please respect copyright.PENANATkOg4KVv1e
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間452Please respect copyright.PENANAXSLkGf9O8c
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠452Please respect copyright.PENANAW2Yy6pGzSZ
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖452Please respect copyright.PENANAM0OZijsZiI
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒452Please respect copyright.PENANAMAJcQfka65
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說452Please respect copyright.PENANARhPRyvd9GO
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》452Please respect copyright.PENANAoGvHGyzs6o
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞452Please respect copyright.PENANAbwz9A0Bk4p
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!