感謝各位的投稿!229Please respect copyright.PENANAtRJWyxEVkb
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!229Please respect copyright.PENANATbJnRQPpKP
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~229Please respect copyright.PENANAwwWY0EBtuE
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法229Please respect copyright.PENANATybvGAxeVk
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!229Please respect copyright.PENANAI3YoBs0aqa
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!229Please respect copyright.PENANAb9Z8OYq3IV
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》229Please respect copyright.PENANAp0qvYaAKen
(兼人氣獎得主)229Please respect copyright.PENANAEJefZsN31P
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD229Please respect copyright.PENANA1jubkrnpwU
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W229Please respect copyright.PENANAEnAvRXMmIw
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!229Please respect copyright.PENANAONU6c7bOpr
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」229Please respect copyright.PENANA2ASvXjiCIA
結果後續結尾意外二連發!229Please respect copyright.PENANAKpvX5FQzMI
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意229Please respect copyright.PENANA6wyfvjyZPi
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺229Please respect copyright.PENANA8ALqQrQ0u7
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事229Please respect copyright.PENANAROTFEeu4DB
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》229Please respect copyright.PENANAf50J6HCWz6
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD229Please respect copyright.PENANAx5NsaTTPBf
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯229Please respect copyright.PENANAWeblzDwAlF
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣229Please respect copyright.PENANAcMX3r1nQJp
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD229Please respect copyright.PENANAWodrx7o9MN
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~229Please respect copyright.PENANAMIgdeZro7p
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?229Please respect copyright.PENANAcAVxtFEhh9
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文229Please respect copyright.PENANA4yCetlZ3Bd
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:229Please respect copyright.PENANAVHS9epae4k
這個名次是最難抉擇的229Please respect copyright.PENANAjkpyGLtYhj
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態229Please respect copyright.PENANAXhOeCsYSRq
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧229Please respect copyright.PENANAwbmQHuh3Mq
以發佈順序點評:229Please respect copyright.PENANABqXDoWseTZ
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》229Please respect copyright.PENANA1ZK57jlW1a
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底229Please respect copyright.PENANATNRS4kXSQM
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END229Please respect copyright.PENANAkfFHQsPLog
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺229Please respect copyright.PENANArHWsH8nukY
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案229Please respect copyright.PENANA3CVUxZ4XM0
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w229Please respect copyright.PENANA9DhaaYrZGz
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖229Please respect copyright.PENANA3JjZP06sJK
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到229Please respect copyright.PENANA8Ei4UzChfo
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》229Please respect copyright.PENANAgHGXPM1zB0
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!229Please respect copyright.PENANASF37voxAGw
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點229Please respect copyright.PENANAQyezZ7sooT
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD229Please respect copyright.PENANALpYCRfvsNB
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)229Please respect copyright.PENANALlbktuE1fm
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒229Please respect copyright.PENANAPmpGPONQoe
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚229Please respect copyright.PENANACedZqCxq5Y
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失229Please respect copyright.PENANAnZ8ly6MLzl
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了229Please respect copyright.PENANA9mUDaAdrQn
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性229Please respect copyright.PENANAWGiNyOA76H
例如:229Please respect copyright.PENANAlgXcw0BLSh
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢229Please respect copyright.PENANAVMYwZD3GpE
>放學忘記去放乖乖229Please respect copyright.PENANApyzHjwZlZB
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂229Please respect copyright.PENANALU63S2qryX
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些229Please respect copyright.PENANA7BGAeWadgG
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性229Please respect copyright.PENANA0azbAjzGLI
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》229Please respect copyright.PENANAWwkvVGOCym
宛如聊齋的古風故事229Please respect copyright.PENANA5WPBwfp1lx
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?229Please respect copyright.PENANAuUTq9pqHT2
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋229Please respect copyright.PENANAF59s3iXepd
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)229Please respect copyright.PENANA3XIDz08aPJ
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?229Please respect copyright.PENANATjPO5Cimo9
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度229Please respect copyright.PENANArm5BzO6JNG
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD229Please respect copyright.PENANA52DIArD3WS
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌229Please respect copyright.PENANAXNKn0aJGzQ
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了229Please respect copyright.PENANAWwVNz9uWsr
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞229Please respect copyright.PENANALbn1YvioFd
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間229Please respect copyright.PENANA011jF3hmQo
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠229Please respect copyright.PENANAhQEUPq3mp5
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖229Please respect copyright.PENANA6zuE00u7pq
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒229Please respect copyright.PENANAGxchFH4rGE
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說229Please respect copyright.PENANAEVgpqcrx3T
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》229Please respect copyright.PENANAkTlU7QmWEg
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞229Please respect copyright.PENANAaoHmC28Chb
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!