感謝各位的投稿!223Please respect copyright.PENANAeqUfa5soHf
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!223Please respect copyright.PENANAt7opsISjJv
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~223Please respect copyright.PENANAYEkwV334vc
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法223Please respect copyright.PENANA9r6P1ef371
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!223Please respect copyright.PENANA0vQu8hJNtT
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!223Please respect copyright.PENANAjOLh1gXVyO
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》223Please respect copyright.PENANASzdzOQ1RhZ
(兼人氣獎得主)223Please respect copyright.PENANAgrFzk7vGim
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD223Please respect copyright.PENANAffzWtb6XBm
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W223Please respect copyright.PENANAGJW7shVG0s
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!223Please respect copyright.PENANAxV8gsRvUe2
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」223Please respect copyright.PENANAPVJndkVfJV
結果後續結尾意外二連發!223Please respect copyright.PENANAZyzUgkqybr
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意223Please respect copyright.PENANAqMSqCoQ55T
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺223Please respect copyright.PENANA4meJ3SlHtW
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事223Please respect copyright.PENANARU5KB2ePkh
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》223Please respect copyright.PENANA97uKe6KATY
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD223Please respect copyright.PENANACTnQVQ1nNw
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯223Please respect copyright.PENANA8H427FRNZj
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣223Please respect copyright.PENANAwqHqUPY0Th
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD223Please respect copyright.PENANAx42cvslsuH
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~223Please respect copyright.PENANAQq9d7pYcWb
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?223Please respect copyright.PENANAg5jZTdRALK
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文223Please respect copyright.PENANAmAlHWyVhZL
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:223Please respect copyright.PENANAn3Db4RQeRo
這個名次是最難抉擇的223Please respect copyright.PENANAm4UjaCJNsG
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態223Please respect copyright.PENANAecvS8ZdCXx
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧223Please respect copyright.PENANAZiG1JP3jBG
以發佈順序點評:223Please respect copyright.PENANAxp4WqxcJDB
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》223Please respect copyright.PENANAVvzTJw66t4
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底223Please respect copyright.PENANAEWXbzMKNtc
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END223Please respect copyright.PENANArwC4TRg1OZ
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺223Please respect copyright.PENANAW97FsK3cyy
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案223Please respect copyright.PENANA54W3R4KRpX
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w223Please respect copyright.PENANAe0ZFuCnhmg
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖223Please respect copyright.PENANAW99rBcQzJz
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到223Please respect copyright.PENANAOeet4CPvec
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》223Please respect copyright.PENANAfdXm4tKj4X
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!223Please respect copyright.PENANACIk3kg1IFP
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點223Please respect copyright.PENANASLFZKT9i9C
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD223Please respect copyright.PENANAFJoPh0TdXm
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)223Please respect copyright.PENANAJ0xsKdwIC1
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒223Please respect copyright.PENANAJn53y7iuEb
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚223Please respect copyright.PENANAGMRU1ut2YZ
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失223Please respect copyright.PENANAXTwQS63kIi
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了223Please respect copyright.PENANAC5j3Y6ug4d
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性223Please respect copyright.PENANA1wMgbOHHky
例如:223Please respect copyright.PENANAE7gr5oQXBb
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢223Please respect copyright.PENANAslyCaGzfSg
>放學忘記去放乖乖223Please respect copyright.PENANAsV3jpFzjED
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂223Please respect copyright.PENANAeJlZztAMHr
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些223Please respect copyright.PENANAC3H91LgFPf
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性223Please respect copyright.PENANAysOlNoNabB
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》223Please respect copyright.PENANASeHtnpR1de
宛如聊齋的古風故事223Please respect copyright.PENANA3CSqUQz8A2
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?223Please respect copyright.PENANADzs2JZSB9c
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋223Please respect copyright.PENANA1aJfMnwf5d
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)223Please respect copyright.PENANAc0pEuKEKlH
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?223Please respect copyright.PENANAPQlQjiy5TV
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度223Please respect copyright.PENANA8C0wahTMxe
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD223Please respect copyright.PENANAOUNZK8vUGQ
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌223Please respect copyright.PENANADuWMrFrp9a
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了223Please respect copyright.PENANAap9iYN2VkQ
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞223Please respect copyright.PENANAqzhPYMY2NG
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間223Please respect copyright.PENANAVQJvkElchM
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠223Please respect copyright.PENANAp8gYvVLMEb
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖223Please respect copyright.PENANAYiHLWnxiTP
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒223Please respect copyright.PENANA3jAe26vmNA
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說223Please respect copyright.PENANAcAkGiKBciu
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》223Please respect copyright.PENANAokIFuLY9kz
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞223Please respect copyright.PENANAEQtrIzl5H3
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!