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創作挑戰第三期語評
ISSUE #177
Author: 寂魚
創作挑戰第三期語評
Author: 寂魚
ISSUE #177
▌篇181 鬧脾氣
No Plagiarism!VY5hKqCfqKhv1d2Tq4gVposted on PＥNAＮＡ

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▌類型  短文35Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4JVDZqMgna
▌作者  析梓燕

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新年快樂我覺得主體上需要的是一種情緒上面的表達，不過前面舖陳的雪景與冬意仍是令人感覺有冬季的味道。35Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxq1c9JV8Fs
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析梓燕大其實可以多往為何鬧脾氣？35Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHpm7O32DOm
及為何和好後等等如何發展，延伸敘寫，說不定會有更好的想法。

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創作挑戰第三期語評
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Adventure
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Last updated: Jul 5, 2025
Total word count: 27,930
Total reading time: 93 Minutes
Writer:
寂魚
異世界 網遊 世界觀 人設 筆記 大綱 寂魚
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