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語評：創挑第三期
ISSUE #23
Author: 寂魚
語評：創挑第三期
Author: 寂魚
ISSUE #23
▌篇25 暖他一整天
No Plagiarism!qPy0RrWKQrJsfQQNX4Zqposted on PＥNAＮＡ

918Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ83IdYGp6so

▌類型 短文

▌作者 JAM

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一言就開車車，我喜歡.....我是說我喜歡戀愛的感覺，所以，那究竟景巡的手是摸到哪邊去了，有沒有更完整的提示？918Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd0ViabR0yb
「快！告訴我！快，我要知道！給我看看。」918Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeFsyaQdEw9
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去除掉開車的部分，文筆用詞也非常精美，對於冬天的佈局、寫景，開篇點題非常完美，三人互動的人際關係，更是唯妙唯肖的生動活潑，尾端的溫馨提醒更是如「天外飛來一筆」，同樣實用。918Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsTPTey4vjk
918Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiHTihhTuKi
藉以冬天一題，巧妙簡短敘寫出，年少慾火易燃的青春悸動，當然，魚魚不可以自己發車，只好藉由廢癌末期的jam大車車，乘坐一趟純情的禁忌物語。918Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBtYKuBaYPO
918Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYECHMcXVy2
謝謝大大無私的承載，非常滿足（？？）

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語評：創挑第三期
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Last updated: Jul 5, 2025
Total word count: 27,930
Total reading time: 93 Minutes
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