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創作挑戰第三期語評
Author:
寂魚
創作挑戰第三期語評
Author:
寂魚
ISSUE #137
▌篇139 醜小椏
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語意敘述、錯字及沒有排版的文，是這篇仍需要改進的地方，但整體來說故事的完整性還是能表達出來。32Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmIc7NrjCAN
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透過筆下刻劃出了自己的情感，結尾透過孩子第三人稱的視角發覺到了臨摹筆下的小椏，原來內心仍是暗自鬱鬱蒼蒼。32Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5e9JXDH0t2
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尤以風吹動拂面而來，卻在眾人見識不到的視角中，她捕捉到了那一絲女人的另外一面，非常可貴。8964 copyright protection28ＰＥＮＡＮＡk5PWHHjkNW 維尼
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