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[1] 押廣東話 /on/ 韻。94Please respect copyright.PENANAHh9UrqOggf
[2] 冇番號提供。94Please respect copyright.PENANA9hCQgrV6vi
[3] 看:平聲。讀陰平聲,即廣東話第一聲,/hon1/,看更、看守嘅看音。94Please respect copyright.PENANABImpbsr7X1
[4] 白玉:《紅樓夢.賈寶玉神遊太虛境 警幻仙曲演紅樓夢》94Please respect copyright.PENANApcKk51wOev
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氣質美如蘭,才華馥比仙,天生成孤癖人皆罕。你道是啖肉食腥膻,視綺羅俗厭;卻不知太高人愈妒,過潔世同嫌。可歎這青燈古殿人將老,孤負了紅粉朱樓春色闌!到頭來,依舊是風塵骯髒違心願,好一似無瑕白玉遭泥陷。又何須王孫公子歎無緣?94Please respect copyright.PENANAWdydOXuCUV
[5] 跨:仄聲。讀陰去聲,即廣東話第三聲,/kwaa3/。廣東話口語掛衫、掛起佢個「掛」音。94Please respect copyright.PENANABQVGO5LnA6
[6] 第廿四次德尼思化創作會嘅主題係「情慾」。