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虛言
ISSUE #41
Author: 虛冲
虛言
Author: 虛冲
ISSUE #41
【七絶】一代人
No Plagiarism!WjpJGELJin4AB432KFBxposted on PＥNAＮＡ

漆黑乾坤黑眼睛　難尋美好覓光明

天空底下無新事　只有官商與鬼冥

仄仄平平仄仄平　平平仄仄仄平平

平平仄仄平平仄　仄仄平平仄仄平

註：637Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQiEHfDJcZY

第一次德尼思化創作會嘅主題係「身體部位」。因為主題係身體部位，所以諗起眼睛，亦因而諗起顧城嘅《一代人》，就有咗呢首詩。詩題同頭兩句係借鑑於矇矓派詩人顧城嘅同名新詩《一代人》。佢哋嗰一代喺北京嘅感受，嚟到我哋呢一代，同樣感受到嗰種漆黑晦暗。

顧城《一代人》

黑夜給了我黑色的眼睛，

我卻用它尋找光明。

216.73.216.139

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虛言
Poetry
Last updated: Jul 15, 2026
Total word count: 21,757
Total reading time: 73 Minutes
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香港作者 香港 詩詞 詩 香港人 詞 宋詞 虛冲 格律詩 虛言 七絶 五絶 七律 五律
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