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虛言
ISSUE #141
Author: 虛冲
虛言
Author: 虛冲
ISSUE #141
【五絶】出水清
No Plagiarism!zWkPy4UDYNB7ViLCFJLLposted on PＥNAＮＡ

翠黛依山秀　芙蓉出水清

柔荑纖柳弱　玉筍細雲輕

仄仄平平仄　平平仄仄平

平平平仄仄　仄仄仄平平

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[1] 押廣東話 /ing/ 韻。307Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl8WEWZ92I2
[2] 原創作挑戰在此。307Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhZo7xn5FCN
[3] 原詩版本如下：307Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7jnZS9ImAb
【五絶】芙蓉面307Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYg3hjH47UT
翠黛依山秀　芙蓉出水清307Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjvoKxYM9Zm
柔荑纖細柳　踏步似煙輕

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虛言
Poetry
Last updated: Jul 15, 2026
Total word count: 21,757
Total reading time: 73 Minutes
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香港作者 香港 詩詞 詩 香港人 詞 宋詞 虛冲 格律詩 虛言 七絶 五絶 七律 五律
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