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虛言
ISSUE #127
Author: 虛冲
虛言
Author: 虛冲
ISSUE #127
【改詞】過路客
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寄調：青花瓷

原曲主唱：周杰倫367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhAtEne0k7x
作詞：方文山367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1YTj7iK8ZJ
作曲：周杰倫367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdZHRgTJk04
編曲：鍾興民

山遠路近 過路客 狹路惹密雲

霜雪驟降 染白髮 雨霑濕髮鬢

攜同一生 悲與喜 思索着愛恨

奢想可身心俱瀟灑退隱

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDQUH0WJmAf

花有並蒂 鳥掠過 與伴侶絶塵

留下墨客 處俗世 癡心於五蘊

飄雨灑霑衣紛紛 各自消散再沒法捉緊

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuEgoXXwhlF

天蒼蒼鳥歸林 迷夢裏覓尋

風煙縹緲幽林 雲霧中俯瞰

聞沿路醉醺散自芳草間四滲

野村百花會流露更甚

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhaclF97wlf

天蒼蒼鳥歸林 沿味再覓尋

翩翩飛向風塵 塵俗中俯瞰

凡塵俗世間愛恨交織中探堪 情海中幽禁

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡglNTcJDiPJ

山近路遠 見日至 作別雨共雲

春意盛放 遍綠野 已不分遠近

沿途風光 花似海 千鳥亦靠近

手輕拈春花 山風吹正緊

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5N7FfwMKM4

一介濁世 過路客 縱萬里獨行

仍然願作 季候鳥 棲身於老鎮

風雨中一蓑輕身 再踏荒野繼續去開墾

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhMZvYdzwwg

天蒼蒼鳥歸林 紅日已下沉

山峰景致蒼茫 如暴風昏暗

嘗回望片刻擱在心底中初心

挖出這生裏無盡缺陷

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaKtgPB0hiZ

天蒼蒼鳥歸林 明月已下沉

旭光普照森林 林木枝間滲

詞人墨客書往事歸因出教訓 彌補心灰暗

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQgWVTLZwZO

天蒼蒼鳥歸林 仍濁世獨行

棲身廣闊天涯 隨夢境昏浸

緣和份銘刻結聚編纂出此心

最終要為無常負責任

367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM7QevUqURH

天蒼蒼鳥歸林 仍願去覓尋

天高海闊縱橫 餘恨終解禁

扶搖直上觀雨後身心終脫困 從天邊俯瞰

註：

[1] 德尼思化二零二五年七月投稿主題係「模仿」，第一稿可以喺呢度睇返。367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2tDz1NWH5m
[2] 第二稿可以去我嘅Threads睇返。367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIG04z2u7s1
[3] 呢個版本嘅「飄雨灑霑雨紛紛」由思友Redqueen提供。367Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo6XoPzyrJP
[4] 所參與創作挑戰在此。

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