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虛言
ISSUE #121
Author: 虛冲
虛言
Author: 虛冲
ISSUE #121
【新詩】兩茫茫
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古詩翻遍亦茫茫

方覺月華遍地光

三美主張行不得

時常更是老人腔

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古人教咗我睇古詩嘅眼睛

我卻要用佢寫新詩

茫然望向黑夜　透過玻璃

望住每一代人都望過嘅夜空

229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9c3G8gyec3

曹操就話月明星稀

月圓之夜　月華遍地

仲見到北斗七星

斗柄指坤　天已立秋

229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeg89PS1ifW

始終有祲老人馟

想將七星分拆

係咪一定要砌成大熊座

茫茫星海中似乎失去咗指引

229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuhetsI0FAV

唯有開支獺祭　爆佢玻璃

唔理新月滿月

與月對酒

同眾星浮游於茫茫詩海

註：

[1] 第一節七絶押廣東話 /ong/韻。229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdFXmk1moK7
[2] 寫此詩的心路歷程請到《虛室》閱讀。229Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXQLj9zYKeK

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虛言
Poetry
Last updated: Jun 2, 2026
Total word count: 21,369
Total reading time: 71 Minutes
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虛冲
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