No Plagiarism!4DuzXOqfQezv2Z39zKsMposted on PENANA 這是幼稚的小學年代發生的事情,那年我讀小六。8964 copyright protection143PENANAHYyuWALLWT 維尼
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那段時間爸爸沒有辦法回家,便拜託冠叔照顧我。8964 copyright protection143PENANAHYKJj2wh45 維尼
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悶熱的夏夜,漆黑的世界被隔離在陽台之外,透過落地的玻璃門能看到遠處樓房的燈,還有空置停車場的照明。8964 copyright protection143PENANAqtFOx3u9jl 維尼
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晚飯過後只有我和冠叔在客廳,冠叔的身材十分壯碩,坐在椅子上,他的肩膀給我一種山的錯覺。8964 copyright protection143PENANA7raRx4PS4M 維尼
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他像個武士一樣一言不發,剛毅的臉神背負着一道橫眉。8964 copyright protection143PENANAKoYKsA0PP3 維尼
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「不如你睇住電視先?」我用遙控器打開電視。8964 copyright protection143PENANA5rbJyOnTeJ 維尼
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「你唔睇?」8964 copyright protection143PENANAeDELzOND4B 維尼
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透過小便的藉口,我難得獲得喘息的時間,盡量拖延的我徐徐而進,最後還是回到冠叔的旁邊。8964 copyright protection143PENANARyuppSS7JQ 維尼
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如果要和冠叔聊天應該很困難,幸好我有事情要做。8964 copyright protection143PENANADotPMyagq3 維尼
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小六學生都要做專題研習,當然我也不例外。我們決定用話劇的形式表演,劇本就在我眼前,毫無意外的話,這將是最終定稿。8964 copyright protection143PENANAEHVEDsE9bU 維尼
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這個劇本卻讓我很頭痛。8964 copyright protection143PENANAsLqAUD8WYr 維尼
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我們的專題報告主題是環保,劇本的名字叫《剩男》,他所用的一切東西都由他撿回來,某天他發現自己經常遺失東西,認為是被人偷了,於是展開了追捕兇手的過程……8964 copyright protection143PENANAZYwfU00gC4 維尼
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如果劇本只到這裡,我大概會欣然接受。 8964 copyright protection143PENANAmIet5eGkgY 維尼
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問題出在結尾,那位兇手是位忽然冒出來的角色,甚至有人建議兇手叫大嘥鬼。不僅如此,線索的設置也很牽強。8964 copyright protection143PENANABii9PEBbJG 維尼
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如果有誰可以幫忙閱讀一下就好,他覺得可以接受的話,我就可以當作沒事發生。8964 copyright protection143PENANAgZoVWdR3W1 維尼
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我望向冠叔,他的臉部線條強悍,紋路如溝壑一般深邃。8964 copyright protection143PENANAUH916e6xy3 維尼
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「冠叔,你想唔想睇吓我哋嘅劇本。」8964 copyright protection143PENANATZW5KRE6qu 維尼
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冠叔捧着劇本讀了近10分鐘。8964 copyright protection143PENANAAMNH5AF0fb 維尼
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「我以前做過偵探。」冠叔直瞪着劇本。8964 copyright protection143PENANA8ScQxmzrfH 維尼
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「嘩,有槍嗰啲?」8964 copyright protection143PENANA6cXweABjA3 維尼
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「梗喺冇,私家嗰種。」8964 copyright protection143PENANAk2ecvHD0Up 維尼
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「都好勁呀。」8964 copyright protection143PENANAYxqOshituK 維尼
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「我覺得呢部劇,證據唔足以說服我。」8964 copyright protection143PENANAJV5pYOl1gp 維尼
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「其實…我都覺得喺。」8964 copyright protection143PENANAqUB49ScUri 維尼
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冠叔把臉突過來,瞧着我的眼說到。8964 copyright protection143PENANA31Ucimu7tS 維尼
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「咁你要同啲同學講。」8964 copyright protection143PENANAPT7Gl5aZa9 維尼
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「喺嘅……哈哈。」8964 copyright protection143PENANA7ZKV7pl9ZJ 維尼
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我試圖用笑聲掩飾心中的尷尬,我被夾在同學的面子與劇本間,冠叔,則從縫隙中向我投來了直球。8964 copyright protection143PENANADNLBTP84cf 維尼
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「要點樣講俾佢哋聽呢?」8964 copyright protection143PENANAemJOMQ4U4r 維尼
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「認真咁講,呢個劇本」他挪動手指。「唔掂。」8964 copyright protection143PENANAiEZSyeka7b 維尼
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我想說的是「要怎麼問得體面一點。」,可我覺得再問幾遍冠叔的回答都會一樣,畢竟在他眼中這些都不是問題。8964 copyright protection143PENANAas6dtI7MzV 維尼
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如果搬出一些理論的話,他們會覺得我在賣弄吧?但是直接指出劇本有拙劣的破綻也不可行。8964 copyright protection143PENANAT66M99GJur 維尼
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修改劇本與製作新道具顯然會帶來許多繁瑣作業,一定會被他們討厭的。8964 copyright protection143PENANAiCn24HH2kK 維尼
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直接表達出來的話,我真實的想法會讓大家開心嗎?也許我該學那些參議員,說些半真半假的話。8964 copyright protection143PENANABpitUeJoev 維尼
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