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凌清日誌
ISSUE #82
Author: 凌清
Published:
Jan 15, 2022
凌清日誌
Author: 凌清
Published:
Jan 15, 2022
ISSUE #82
0115 - 嗚嗚……
No Plagiarism!w7ozhWG5WZ8MNrQkYOO0posted on PＥNAＮＡ

嗚嗚……母親不喜歡我的文章……

母親、虛沖大哥、國文老師和班導師，都給我一樣的評語……

「描述句太多了，劇情呢？放哪去了？」

母親說的更狠、更直白……「這樣只會讓讀者壓力很大，厭煩你冗長的贅述，進而討厭妳的文章……」

唉……我怎麼總是拿捏不到，反而愈來愈失控呢……不行了，要崩潰了……真的該再好好加油才是……

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Last updated: Sep 9, 2023
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