前陣子，壞壞忽然收到幾次詢問

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM8Kb1yGZr4

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlrI4iZ8U46

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEbgP8r0BJC

類似的問題：「壞壞，你覺得我的小說欠缺什麼？」

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyhTzlkS6ZL

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡICRe6u7G2P

因為壞壞又胖又重又懶惰

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqjHQgoUPUC

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ50FciQ5UI8

沒有力氣一個個回答

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSjABuPMbRb

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7jB0iBRGVJ

加上壞壞覺得今後可能會不時被問這個問題

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGxqUXtdwQX

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkF5pGJ5fz6

所以壞壞決定寫出這篇文章

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG2oZ2ERkJY

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhKQXLzCNy1

一口氣回答

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUsDwVQRoc7

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNrLJfWTO3o

所以你的小說欠缺什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLEZLVaz6uI

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4IECAO0FFA

其實，壞壞看其他人寫的小說

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOdn3ltlhgD

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFC3A54NFl7

大致上都是隨機翻個幾篇，大致看看內容

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXOrlvb0ntq

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJWlmn1bzQr

然後壞壞就大概就知道這個作者的能力和水平到哪裡了

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE5MvuQcOVY

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3n3z0Kxe7S

（別忘記，壞壞在小說中打滾二十年了）

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG4DOetyZAr

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsJc6AK6Pz2

其實巴哈這裡的小說作者，水準差不太多

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvWiWp3oG5u

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3mShfCXg85

所以壞壞可以比較放心的寫出這篇通用文

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT5qWoyE841

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ55OirsmTzw

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnxPmb7ldlE

底下，正文開始

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZryHbjXnPW

（請全文看完，不要斷章取義喔）

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT9Voe0XBzs

壞壞，我的小說欠缺什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy3JAdSkXgS

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFeZlZLwThv

壞壞先問你一個反問

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJqzorIIQHe

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsu07gjZGnY

小說是什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0DFeAXBeG7

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRUeR7qIwNx

小說的本質是故事

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVG97eiFQHp

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfxfn0lIRrS

故事的本質是人類

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnNFieWXMwn

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEvyrp8WFMC

就算主要角色不是『人類』，多少還是會有擬人的部分存在

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3VK7ySL6XE

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHrNWon2Nin

故事講述的，就是人類

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXLxzQh87eW

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaEEOnsDdTN

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhTiIweybAG

人類的七情六慾

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5kp9hep72V

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk2PxW0Or6V

人類的愛恨情仇

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYs4qdJLb7p

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDZOcWUlYo6

人類的喜怒哀樂

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4dqEumRShF

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgrxu9kZByk

人類遭遇的大大小小事情

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxUS6jSEHX5

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMmOFtik0Xp

這就是故事

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk0gKdkzevS

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeidpK6C2ZF

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR2WWn5ATMX

為什麼要說故事？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7qIBftOGDx

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsfhTzUO0zV

為什麼要聽故事？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkRcCdI8M50

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZseMrR6l71

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU6u8X26WEG

因為故事的深層本質，是傳承和教導

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdg2yrIBqM9

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUo5uR1St2v

傳承和教導，是故事的精神

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeqxvARYP8A

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4irmClBvac

年輕人啊，壞壞告訴你一個故事喔，恐怖電影（故事）裡面的婊子或是淫蕩女，最後總是難逃一死喔

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiXeWqY6SBb

故事裡面的好心人善心人，很有可能逃過一劫，或是獲得大筆財富

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRKwjg9X5k1

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnTlr5BUO8E

你喜不喜歡這樣的安排？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU9zQ0rb2fo

為什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbJqr6yuzjJ

又為什麼故事最後總是這樣發展？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzsmXZbZAGu

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL7ihrey1lF

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3hzoX8po1r

接下來，下一個問題

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSYynkDD2C4

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡepsJ6MLDZX

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfFbqjxCuBP

你覺得，是什麼讓故事好看？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7YYNSaAiBF

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeOBDsKv3tk

正是故事裡面的感情

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyZ97enxmgo

七情六慾

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ82FvS3NHEz

愛恨情仇

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGnY33rHzWY

人與人之間的各式各樣衝突

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCpYifc5Pnl

是上面那些讓故事好看

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYSdp8MEiEQ

透過那些，你是不是會不知不覺的被教導到一些什麼事情了？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9t5Z1ruaXH

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDd7HeHAPAv

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTIiJ9gYZLY

所以，你的小說欠缺什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc6uMImuQUH

你的小說有這麼好看的七情六慾，愛恨情仇，喜怒哀樂嗎？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0uzMUsFUn3

沒有就是欠缺！

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrSmfmxc1aV

你寫得出來嗎？（這才是真正的問題）

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFX4LV0wh6J

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpS3e8NTm4W

事實是，越是無知，越是容易認為自己寫得出來那麼好看的東西

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwtyvKrc6nE

你知道人類的七情六慾，愛恨情仇，各式各樣衝突，有多難寫嗎？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY61yISbxyh

無知者才會輕鬆就認為自己能輕鬆寫好

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHznHDlCHSi

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0J9zysObr9

接下來，壞壞要告訴你一句很棒的話

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9M1DbRuX0W

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡesaxbG1oTM

最動人最棒的故事，正是人生

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDm2KfIs24t

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj3JvZYsb70

再也找不到比人生更精采的故事了

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY4F34SNRve

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvVFi6cIO2d

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3EUdaBxoUx

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTOm7oz6QfU

最後，壞壞要告訴你一件事

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2jEUm31LjX

你知道一位正常生活成長的作者，要到幾歲才會開始成熟嗎？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhoo8jdnlQG

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR3WIMuTAmX

四十歲

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyzhRdhTqTp

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQuE2gpcq2O

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbPmPhjNWcc

為什麼是四十歲？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnExFbredDY

因為四十年的漫長時間

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFAlnb8KYfh

可以經歷，感受，和體會多少的七情六慾，愛恨情仇，人和人之間的衝突

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBVG6ocmUhI

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbH1gPqrpgU

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡweT5ZWbORh

親身經歷過這麼多的作者

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcnVJtRxcbu

你想他會有多少精彩好故事可以說？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG7jWD584cZ

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEotPYrclpq

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy0gncCitfF

所以，你的小說欠缺什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡotiRFICWtO

如果你連上面那些基本道理都不知道，就開始問自己的作品作欠缺什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6M4iE7BqWS

你欠缺的太多了

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuJpwb1JnDY

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOita7emmse

先學會走的好，再去問怎麼跑的快吧

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhFYDtw6F2G

古人一句話說得好

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC1iAeA3WcI

行萬里路，勝讀萬卷書

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE4oc9jxOZW

先去好好的體會人生

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJKtI5nNDUb

感受人和人之間的愛恨情仇，喜怒哀樂

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAWqV2Rix2T

人與人之間的故事

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1HUZNHFWhB

再回來寫小說

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyoLY5Sv96m

怎麼樣？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK2R4wi41Jj

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5YeC3Ov4oY

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0T8G1i0uMs

你有沒有遇過那種你真的一心想親手殺他的人？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXAs8SBFn3L

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsOXbRCauVK

你有沒有真正深愛過一個人？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFPScDxTify

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy0wsaYtXLx

你有沒有遇過那種就算要下藥迷昏，也很想要把她肚子搞大的女人？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡydoDevIl7k

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx4qdoLeLXq

你有沒有被真正深愛的女人拋棄戴綠帽？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0PnLGFrgbd

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhDx8K0yswU

你有沒有深愛的女人在你眼前嫁給其他男人的痛苦經驗？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpdJnu43rt7

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWYJob4dv0J

你有沒有真正心愛的親友死在你的懷裡的心碎痛苦經驗？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn1exNxAvrK

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUaQF3vMNiw

還有很多的你有沒有？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6u1i8H2AM2

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxXGVJmojuR

如果沒有，你要拿什麼來寫好小說，說出好故事？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsrkNVQWU4a

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1cAcrDgz6A

所以，你的小說欠缺什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfmYIGgg36k

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDIiQmzWYPb

壞壞已經告訴你們了

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9dn7JP2y8C

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHprkG9ANlr

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgwTsf7xUz9

你的小說只要能有下面這張照片這麼好看，你的小說就不欠缺了

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU3SyxCLTZR

（二戰日本經歷核爆生存下來的老阿媽，回憶講述遭遇核爆後往事）

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCB2wsk46S0

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHizeqnhZMq

這段故事（照片）精采好看吧？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrWSG86Hj4O

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAVda6Ub2bD

所以你的小說欠缺什麼？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLip9ih88JE

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWxg807RwnH

加油，希望你的小說有一天也能這麼好看！

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJNPWY3d9MI

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo5799Uasv4

什麼？你問壞壞​​​​​​​的小說有沒有這麼好看？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8fUd8qNAuf

１：我的妹妹雯雯

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbxKWX8dPxW

２：被我養育的小蘿莉

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡapWsN6K4Wy

這二本書已經在網路活過漫長十五年，讀者還是一直出現，你說好不好看？

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpo8YrB5xWk

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk4AjeiVxR1

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdA60IfGDlH

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz4DaVrTQ0C

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ61sKZAKsUY

599Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTLvMr2KbM7

216.73.216.72